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Comment from Teri7
Debi. This is a very well written, true poem you have penned. I pray those that are on the wrong path will consider the consequences and repent. Paul, in the Bible, says I die daily. That means we are to be in a repenting state. We never know when Jesus will come to take His bride away to be with Him forever. What a glorious day that will be. Thank you for sharing. I pray it touches hearts that read it today! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Debi. This is a very well written, true poem you have penned. I pray those that are on the wrong path will consider the consequences and repent. Paul, in the Bible, says I die daily. That means we are to be in a repenting state. We never know when Jesus will come to take His bride away to be with Him forever. What a glorious day that will be. Thank you for sharing. I pray it touches hearts that read it today! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Teri, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend. Much love to you and yours!!
Love, Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a wonderful witness poem, excellently written in rhyme and rhythm. Your heart for the lost is beautifully painted in these words. I'm so glad I got to meet you, dear special friend. Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Verna
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is a wonderful witness poem, excellently written in rhyme and rhythm. Your heart for the lost is beautifully painted in these words. I'm so glad I got to meet you, dear special friend. Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Verna
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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My dearest Verna, what a beautiful review and the sweetest words, plus your generous six stars!! I cannot thank you enough and have always been thankful for you and your Christian values. That is why I know you as my sister in Christ and that we will be always be friends. Thank you again, my sweet sister. Lotsa Love, Debi
Comment from shad blunt
May we humbly ask are higher power of choice, what path that he may lead us on today to dodge Satan's curve balls, that tomorrow may bring peace within to shine the light from above. I find that my rainy days are filled with spiritual rays that lead the path that I may always pray from my lord above. Love the poem and may you be blessed today and forever to find the gate.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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May we humbly ask are higher power of choice, what path that he may lead us on today to dodge Satan's curve balls, that tomorrow may bring peace within to shine the light from above. I find that my rainy days are filled with spiritual rays that lead the path that I may always pray from my lord above. Love the poem and may you be blessed today and forever to find the gate.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hello Shad, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi
This is a nicely worded religious poem that is a good essay of evangelization and how to get to heaven. There are a lot of people to pray
for so they convert. This is the apt season for such a poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Debi
This is a nicely worded religious poem that is a good essay of evangelization and how to get to heaven. There are a lot of people to pray
for so they convert. This is the apt season for such a poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Joan, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Don't mention it, Debi.
Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
what an excellent poem, Debi, and what excellent advice. If only everyone would listen, wouldn't it be a lovely world? Well done, my dear friend, you have excelled yourself here. But your poetry is always amazing. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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what an excellent poem, Debi, and what excellent advice. If only everyone would listen, wouldn't it be a lovely world? Well done, my dear friend, you have excelled yourself here. But your poetry is always amazing. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hello my darling friend, Sandra. I so appreciate your kind and caring review and words for my heaven verse. Going into the holiday is a good time to reach some people so I thought I would try. Thanks again for the lovely review. Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Thank you, Debi, for sharing your passionate plea, inspired by faith, to take the path of righteousness. Your fine words are expressed throughout in beautifully metered and rhymed poetry and further complemented with an eye-catching visual, sending a strong message to all. Well done! Love Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debi, for sharing your passionate plea, inspired by faith, to take the path of righteousness. Your fine words are expressed throughout in beautifully metered and rhymed poetry and further complemented with an eye-catching visual, sending a strong message to all. Well done! Love Debbie
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hello my dear Debbie, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
This is an awesome poem. It flows nicely from start to finish. You are the master storyteller and everything you touch turns to go. You go girl
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Debi,
This is an awesome poem. It flows nicely from start to finish. You are the master storyteller and everything you touch turns to go. You go girl
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia., and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Debi,
You're welcome. Happy Thanksgiving
Cecilia
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a clear message about the two paths toward eternity. I pray some will read your poem and choose the narrow road that leads to life, before it is too late. I feel that the time is drawing near for the return of Jesus. You used great rhymes, and the picture is great. Good call to prayer also. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is a clear message about the two paths toward eternity. I pray some will read your poem and choose the narrow road that leads to life, before it is too late. I feel that the time is drawing near for the return of Jesus. You used great rhymes, and the picture is great. Good call to prayer also. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol, and I can't tell you enough how much I appreciated your kind words and the lovely six stars. Thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. You truly mean so much for me.
Love, Debi
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Thanks for your courage to share the clear choice. Blessings. Carol
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Thank you my beautiful friend. You are such a blessing to me. Your words of encouragement are always so helpful.
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You are a blessing to me, but also to many here on FS. Thank you, sweet friend.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written, and it is very profound in the thought. It is true that we have wanted to pass that we can choose in life. We can either choose the one that lays us to heaven, which is the narrow path or we could choose the one to destruction, which is the broad path. Thank you for sharing this because it is very thoughtful. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is a very nicely written, and it is very profound in the thought. It is true that we have wanted to pass that we can choose in life. We can either choose the one that lays us to heaven, which is the narrow path or we could choose the one to destruction, which is the broad path. Thank you for sharing this because it is very thoughtful. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Patricia, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
Debi dear, this is such an important poem for today. I fee the Lord's coming is near and to set aside the spiritual house is foolishness. Jesus has many parables explaining being ready for His second coming. The Parable of the Ten Virgins from
Matthew 25-
But while they were on their way to buy the oil, the bridegroom arrived. The virgins who were ready went in with him to the wedding banquet. And the door was shut."Later the others also came. 'Lord, Lord,' they said, 'open the door for us!'
"But he replied, ['Truly I tell you, I don't know you.']
"Therefore keep watch, because you do not know the day or the hour.
To know the Lord is to be born again, born of the spirit. That is the hope we have of making better decisions by choosing the narrow path, and to be ready for Him when He comes. It is a narrow path. I've been on it for 52 years. I love my Jesus!
Thank you again for sharing this. I'm praying several with respond with faith in Christ. A virtual 6 and compliments. :))
Love & Blessings.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Debi dear, this is such an important poem for today. I fee the Lord's coming is near and to set aside the spiritual house is foolishness. Jesus has many parables explaining being ready for His second coming. The Parable of the Ten Virgins from
Matthew 25-
But while they were on their way to buy the oil, the bridegroom arrived. The virgins who were ready went in with him to the wedding banquet. And the door was shut."Later the others also came. 'Lord, Lord,' they said, 'open the door for us!'
"But he replied, ['Truly I tell you, I don't know you.']
"Therefore keep watch, because you do not know the day or the hour.
To know the Lord is to be born again, born of the spirit. That is the hope we have of making better decisions by choosing the narrow path, and to be ready for Him when He comes. It is a narrow path. I've been on it for 52 years. I love my Jesus!
Thank you again for sharing this. I'm praying several with respond with faith in Christ. A virtual 6 and compliments. :))
Love & Blessings.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Hi Sally, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend. And also for the virtual six!!
Love, Debi
