Mother's Baby
Mothers always come through25 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
A clever flash fiction that has a twist at the end. Well done and fun to read. You had me fooled from the start, I was sure it was a child, in addition to the cat, being abused.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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A clever flash fiction that has a twist at the end. Well done and fun to read. You had me fooled from the start, I was sure it was a child, in addition to the cat, being abused.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I live with five cats and have found them to be excellent judges of character. If they don't like a person, they don't hesitate to let them know.
Comment from royowen
You certainly spring a surprise which is what the contest was designe to do, but I certainly didn't know that before it was expressed, we've owned 12 cats in our married life, and remember every single one them. Great post, good luck, Blessings Roy
Typo : Aaaagh, Fred (screms) screams?
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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You certainly spring a surprise which is what the contest was designe to do, but I certainly didn't know that before it was expressed, we've owned 12 cats in our married life, and remember every single one them. Great post, good luck, Blessings Roy
Typo : Aaaagh, Fred (screms) screams?
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, and thanks for catching the typo. I will edit and correct it. I'm sure you can relate to the pet parent thingy if you have owned cats.
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I do
Comment from joann r romei
This was very cute and perfect for the prompt. I would not put it past some animals, they are very possessive of their moms and daddies, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This was very cute and perfect for the prompt. I would not put it past some animals, they are very possessive of their moms and daddies, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I love writing cat stories and often base them on my experiences with the cats in my life.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this story. I really thought it was a kid in the beginning. The ending was quite a surprise. It was actually a cat. Well written. Great job.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed this story. I really thought it was a kid in the beginning. The ending was quite a surprise. It was actually a cat. Well written. Great job.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I love to write cat stories. I rescued cats for many years and witnessed some uncharacteristic behavior in some of them.
Comment from Gayla putnam
You did surprise me. I expected the writer to be a child, not a sweet kitty. Well, it's not so delightful if one's name is Fred. It kept me in suspense, and I laughed when I came to the twist in the plot. It was fun and lighthearted. Cats really do rule. gayla
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You did surprise me. I expected the writer to be a child, not a sweet kitty. Well, it's not so delightful if one's name is Fred. It kept me in suspense, and I laughed when I came to the twist in the plot. It was fun and lighthearted. Cats really do rule. gayla
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Yes, indeed. Cats do rule the home, and I have five cats who expect me to live by their rules. Lol.