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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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When I came to FanStory, I was a want-to-be writer looking for feedback and camaraderie. Nearly three years later, I have written nearly 200 shorts, essays, and poems. More importantly, I've become a better writer and I have friends who inspire and encourage me. That's what FanStory has done for me.

Thank you for sharing what it has brought to your life.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read. I am happy here, and this place contributes to my health and well being. I knew zip about poetry when I got here. Folks gave me warmth when my Momma passed, and helped me not sink. You are my family. Weird cousins and all. I hope I have helped others as they have helped me. :-) Karen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Those are the sentiments of so many Fanstorian members. Without this outlet some wouldn't be around today. This is so well worded using only the 20 syllables, Karen. Very well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read. I am happy here, and this place contributes to my health and well being. I knew zip about poetry when I got here. Folks gave me warmth when my Momma passed, and helped me not sink. You are my family. Weird cousins and all. I hope I have helped others as they have helped me. :-) Karen
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Nice put together. Love the image and you appear to meet the contest requirements. I am glad you found happiness through this site. Also, you must remember you contributed to all of it. Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    The picture cracked me up. Thanks for the read. I am happy here, and this place contributes to my health and well being. I knew zip about poetry when I got here. Folks gave me warmth when my Momma passed, and helped me not sink. You are my family. Weird cousins and all. I hope I have helped others as they have helped me. :-) Karen
Comment from bob cullen
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Good luck to you for not giving up. And even better luck on finding Fanstory. Hope you get as much pleasure from here as I have. Keep writing and keep having fun

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read. I am happy here, and this place contributes to my health and well being. I knew zip about poetry when I got here. Folks gave me warmth when my Momma passed, and helped me not sink. You are my family. Weird cousins and all. I hope I have helped others as they have helped me. :-) Karen
Comment from CM Pickard
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What a nice happy poem, well done. Having friends makes life so much better. They are the difference between simply getting by and truly thriving. Glad that FanStory did that for you

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read. I am happy here, and this place contributes to my health and well being. I knew zip about poetry when I got here. Folks gave me warmth when my Momma passed, and helped me not sink. You are my family. Weird cousins and all. I hope I have helped others as they have helped me. :-) Karen
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is terrific and I got a charge out of the artwork. Yes FanStory is certainly a wellspring of friends and new ways.

Just one thing you have 21 syllables, but I'm confident you will find that cheeky sod and eradicate it immediately.

Wishing you all the best with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much. I did have 21. I fixed it. You are my hero. I counted it a bunch of times, but somehow I kept getting it wrong. Thanks for the six you perked up my day.
    Karen
Comment from lyenochka
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We're glad you're here and making new friends. Fanstory was a blessing during the pandemic when we couldn't go out and couldn't visit family. But we could write and share with each other here.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    This place has quirks to be sure. But it is my lifeline. You will find petty people and weird rules wherever you go, so don't look for perfection and you will be much happier.That is my theory anyway. Karen
    Karen :-)
reply by lyenochka on 10-Nov-2024
    So true! This is not where we find perfection - no such place on Earth...
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    I simply do the best I can . Don't we all? Thanks for being my patient friend. Karen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The picture with the poem are really good together. You declare how Fanstory friends can be such a good thing in learning new things (even if we cannot actually be in the same room).

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the shiny six. The picture cracked me up.I think we can sometimes be better friends when we don't have to confirm to public meeting. Odd huh? Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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I didn't count - assumed the poem police did.
I've been greatly encouraged by the FanStorians' support following my 'Bile of Bitterness' post. (It's going to be a very tough 2 years until we can take back the Congress.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Seems I had 21. I fixed it.We survived the first time. I worry about the Senate and House too. Love you kiddo. Karen
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation, Karen.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-You give good examples of how
FanStory was meaningful to you and what you learned.
-I am glad it made a difference in your life.
-You have 21 syllables; you could use rebirth
at the end and not include "I".
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the edit. I fixed it as you suggested. I think I was counting Fan Story as two syllables. Thanks for the help. Karen