Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Miracles - Chap 5"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Tim Margetts
All the way through this I have been thinking, pregnant, pregnant.
A mix of going through it 4 times with my lot and nurse brain kicking in, mixing, matching and coming up with more than just random numbers.
If you hadn't ended the way you did, this comment would have been just the same LOL
Catch you on the next one
Tim
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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All the way through this I have been thinking, pregnant, pregnant.
A mix of going through it 4 times with my lot and nurse brain kicking in, mixing, matching and coming up with more than just random numbers.
If you hadn't ended the way you did, this comment would have been just the same LOL
Catch you on the next one
Tim
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks Tim...I'm not sure I followed your review but thank you so much. I hope you will enjoy the drama that's building and about to explode.
Smiles, Carol
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I am a dad 4 times over and each time I knew she was pregnant before she did and chased her with a kit; also, before I retired I was a registered nurse so the symptoms you wrote were screaming at me.
So, I hope that clarifies my bit of a weird review LOL
Tim
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Yes, sir it does, thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Great job again. This left me eager to see how Jenna's journey unfolds - especially her relationship with Matthew. And how she confronts her trauma. The looming uncertainty creates such an interesting story that really draws me in. Excellent writing again!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Great job again. This left me eager to see how Jenna's journey unfolds - especially her relationship with Matthew. And how she confronts her trauma. The looming uncertainty creates such an interesting story that really draws me in. Excellent writing again!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks Michael...I think the next few chapters should make you sit up and take notice. The tension and drama are going to be building full tilt. I thank you for reading and enjoying as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another excellent chapter to your book. Like the talented author you are you leave your audience hanging on the edge. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if Jenna is pregnant as I suspect she is. I'm curious to see if she is and what she's gonna do about it.
Thank you for giving me the chance to read this great story from the beginning.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another excellent chapter to your book. Like the talented author you are you leave your audience hanging on the edge. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if Jenna is pregnant as I suspect she is. I'm curious to see if she is and what she's gonna do about it.
Thank you for giving me the chance to read this great story from the beginning.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Good day, Cecelia! As a new reader, I am anxious to know what you think of the next few chapters. The tension is really building...Hang on!
Smiles, Carol
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I just read chapter six and I'm loving it!!!
Cecilia
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Hurrah! I'm smiling from ear to ear!
Loving it!
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You're a great writer!!!
Cecilia
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear, what a bloody idiot Matthew was. If something happens with Jenna now... I'm thinking she is pregnant, and she is in no state to carry a child, especially a child from a rapist. What will she do? Eleanor is the best person to talk to. Jenna can't go on like this. This is an area that will need to be written carefully. There are many young women who have found themselves in this position. Rapists should not only be sent to prison, they should have it cut off!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Oh dear, what a bloody idiot Matthew was. If something happens with Jenna now... I'm thinking she is pregnant, and she is in no state to carry a child, especially a child from a rapist. What will she do? Eleanor is the best person to talk to. Jenna can't go on like this. This is an area that will need to be written carefully. There are many young women who have found themselves in this position. Rapists should not only be sent to prison, they should have it cut off!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Good morning, my dear. I sent you a message on facebook...a picture actually.
Jenna is going to have to face the problems instead of burying them, but it will take some time. Just the fact that she has hidden the rape from herself and others says a lot about her stability. I agree rapists and molesters don't deserve to be treated as humans... they steal something from a person that can't ever be given back. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
As for Matthew, he's about to dig himself into a big, dark hole!
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol