The Poem That Never Ends
A free verse29 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the flow of this poem and the twist towards the end. You pen a very creative peace. The way the poem walks through the seasons is remarkable. Well done, dear Jessica. You are an outstanding poet.
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I love the flow of this poem and the twist towards the end. You pen a very creative peace. The way the poem walks through the seasons is remarkable. Well done, dear Jessica. You are an outstanding poet.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
I like that each stanza of the free verse tells of a new season. You see that these changes will never end until the sun stops rising and setting. So never ending in our minds
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week.
Joan
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Hi Jessica,
I like that each stanza of the free verse tells of a new season. You see that these changes will never end until the sun stops rising and setting. So never ending in our minds
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Beautiful poem. Lovely image. The one and only poem that never ends. The title alerts the reader to the possibility of a meeting with nature and what could be more powerful and inspiring as the sun. You have a lovely choice of words. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Beautiful poem. Lovely image. The one and only poem that never ends. The title alerts the reader to the possibility of a meeting with nature and what could be more powerful and inspiring as the sun. You have a lovely choice of words. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely free verse poem Jessica. The never ending seasons is a powerful image. A new season begins on the heels of the old. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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A lovely free verse poem Jessica. The never ending seasons is a powerful image. A new season begins on the heels of the old. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The cycle of the seasons never ends and we ride through them accepting the snow in winter, the spring flowers, summer's tiny insects and the falling leaves in Autumn. You captured the magic of each season here Jessica and I enjoyed your free verse full of activity, love Dolly x x x
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The cycle of the seasons never ends and we ride through them accepting the snow in winter, the spring flowers, summer's tiny insects and the falling leaves in Autumn. You captured the magic of each season here Jessica and I enjoyed your free verse full of activity, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
Another example of how to write a free verse poem Jessica, you are a fine writer of these poem, with that poetic flair, and a knack for the beautiful language that is required to be a creator of language, well done, blessings Royn
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Another example of how to write a free verse poem Jessica, you are a fine writer of these poem, with that poetic flair, and a knack for the beautiful language that is required to be a creator of language, well done, blessings Royn
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, the sun is the constant featured that threads all the old with the new. Our lives are governed as much by its absence ~ as its presence. Mind I'd like dine people we know. Lol. I really enjoyed this never ending poem.
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Yes, the sun is the constant featured that threads all the old with the new. Our lives are governed as much by its absence ~ as its presence. Mind I'd like dine people we know. Lol. I really enjoyed this never ending poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Seasons are an unending cycle and give poets plenty of inspiration to poets. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. The flow was amazing and I enjoyed reading.
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Seasons are an unending cycle and give poets plenty of inspiration to poets. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. The flow was amazing and I enjoyed reading.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
This is really lovely. The never ending cycle of the seasons which gives writers so much fabulous inspirational and writing content. This is written beautifully, you have a wonderful way with words!
Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
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This is really lovely. The never ending cycle of the seasons which gives writers so much fabulous inspirational and writing content. This is written beautifully, you have a wonderful way with words!
Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2024