Tempus Fugit
Tempus Fugit (Time is fleeting)30 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
OH! This has so much depth, my friend. I enjoy short works that provide a wealth of truth and meaning. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the votes.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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OH! This has so much depth, my friend. I enjoy short works that provide a wealth of truth and meaning. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the votes.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
short and sweet poem about time - how it passes from the past to the present to the future at least that is how we perceive it, in reality everything happens at once according to the multiverse theory that's how I would written this proactive poem
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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short and sweet poem about time - how it passes from the past to the present to the future at least that is how we perceive it, in reality everything happens at once according to the multiverse theory that's how I would written this proactive poem
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This poem might offer an explanation to why I always feel like I am "somewhere else". You offer a perfect summary of time by comparing it to a pendulum swing. If I were to make any suggestion, it would be to say that I would like to see your font size increased a bit and perhaps even put in bold. Your poem is getting lost beneath that lovely artwork. just a suggestion. enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This poem might offer an explanation to why I always feel like I am "somewhere else". You offer a perfect summary of time by comparing it to a pendulum swing. If I were to make any suggestion, it would be to say that I would like to see your font size increased a bit and perhaps even put in bold. Your poem is getting lost beneath that lovely artwork. just a suggestion. enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your theme of time and the pendulum swinging.
-You do a good job describing time and how it impacts our lives.
-It also relates to your title very well and shows that
"Time is fleeting."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your theme of time and the pendulum swinging.
-You do a good job describing time and how it impacts our lives.
-It also relates to your title very well and shows that
"Time is fleeting."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from zanya
Yes I like the ambiance created here -Time is beyond our reach -it holds the key and moves everything along and we simply have to go with it -minimalist and profound
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Yes I like the ambiance created here -Time is beyond our reach -it holds the key and moves everything along and we simply have to go with it -minimalist and profound
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
As they say if we don't take the lessons of the past seriously we are doomed to continually make the same mistakes again and again, like drinking poison and hoping that it's nutritious, beautifully written D&V, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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As they say if we don't take the lessons of the past seriously we are doomed to continually make the same mistakes again and again, like drinking poison and hoping that it's nutritious, beautifully written D&V, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you Roy for your generous review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Kahlani
This is a reflective poem about time: something that changes from moment to moment. Sometimes time moves slowly, other times it goes too fast. I enjoyed this philosophical post.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This is a reflective poem about time: something that changes from moment to moment. Sometimes time moves slowly, other times it goes too fast. I enjoyed this philosophical post.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you Kahlani for your generous review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
You have used an interesting irony in this piece. The image is eternity and the title is Time is Fleeting. I liked the irony of the two, but I liked the writing more. Your first three lines are the description and the last two are the reality. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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You have used an interesting irony in this piece. The image is eternity and the title is Time is Fleeting. I liked the irony of the two, but I liked the writing more. Your first three lines are the description and the last two are the reality. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for the thoughtful review.
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You are welcome.
Robert
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written 20 syllable poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in their contest. May you have a lovely evening and may you have a good day tomorrow and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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This is a nicely written 20 syllable poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in their contest. May you have a lovely evening and may you have a good day tomorrow and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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God bless you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Seize the moment! Cleverly written.
IMHO if you increase your font size and bold the text, you will appeal to more FanStorians to see/review your poem.
Interesting sculpture you chose for your artwork. I am not familiar with its creator.
Mark
Mark
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Seize the moment! Cleverly written.
IMHO if you increase your font size and bold the text, you will appeal to more FanStorians to see/review your poem.
Interesting sculpture you chose for your artwork. I am not familiar with its creator.
Mark
Mark
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you Mark for your suggestion and kind review.