Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Oh wow, I am really feeling for Miranda right now. As she says, nothing is going right for her, although she has the best of intentions. I too am annoyed with Dougie, thinking he can just waltz back into their lives. Hmm. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Wendy
Edit: I'm not your mom or you're (your) aunt.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you, Wendy. I'm guessing Waylon will go through the anger stage once he sees his dad a couple of times. He will have questions. Thanks for catching those edits. Gretchen

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yeah, I'm with Miranda. Waylon is a teenage boy. His first reaction to hearing from the father who abandoned him, should be anger. That is a natural reaction for a male. Something's up. Good chapter.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you for this. Maybe when his father is there face to face, the anger will come. I appreciate the great review. Gretchen