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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Stranger Danger"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Don't slam those brakes on and damage Rachelle's car with Jane's blood all over the dashboard Gretchen! I am surprised it was you going with Rebekah for clothes shopping when I always thought Rachelle was the fashion icon! No offence to you Gretchen, but it seems you pulled that shopping trip off with Rachelle's approval. It sounds like you have one guessed you would rather lose here. I loved your clever post and your sense of humour Gretchen, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Don't slam those brakes on and damage Rachelle's car with Jane's blood all over the dashboard Gretchen! I am surprised it was you going with Rebekah for clothes shopping when I always thought Rachelle was the fashion icon! No offence to you Gretchen, but it seems you pulled that shopping trip off with Rachelle's approval. It sounds like you have one guessed you would rather lose here. I loved your clever post and your sense of humour Gretchen, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I don't think I would have had a problem leaving Jane in the rear view mirror. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a very good story. It demonstrates the clash of generational viewpoints that can become obvious in many situations. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This is a very good story. It demonstrates the clash of generational viewpoints that can become obvious in many situations. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My grandson is 6 years old. ::)
Dr. Ruth, I haven't heard her name in a long time. She made me laugh.
I haven't gone to a mall in a long time. In Los Angeles we have an open air market with shops, restaurants , and a movie theater. It's called, Americana.
Shopping can be fun but it's hard to shop for a teenager.
It sounds like Rebekah is enjoying the new world.
Well done, another wonderful chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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My grandson is 6 years old. ::)
Dr. Ruth, I haven't heard her name in a long time. She made me laugh.
I haven't gone to a mall in a long time. In Los Angeles we have an open air market with shops, restaurants , and a movie theater. It's called, Americana.
Shopping can be fun but it's hard to shop for a teenager.
It sounds like Rebekah is enjoying the new world.
Well done, another wonderful chapter.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you. I haven't been to a mall in years either. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
I hear what it must be like to travel around with someone like Jane. I've known people like that. One of them is actually named Jane. Another one is someone my mother used to get to come over and put a Tony perm in my straight hair. I would almost pass out before the ordeal was over. I enjoyed reading this.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I hear what it must be like to travel around with someone like Jane. I've known people like that. One of them is actually named Jane. Another one is someone my mother used to get to come over and put a Tony perm in my straight hair. I would almost pass out before the ordeal was over. I enjoyed reading this.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Geez, a Toni perm. I haven't heard that in a long long time. Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't do malls myself. I remember in my teenage years, thinking they were fun, but that was long ago. LOL Thank you for sharing. Is there any possible way Jane could accidentally get left at the mall? LOL
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I don't do malls myself. I remember in my teenage years, thinking they were fun, but that was long ago. LOL Thank you for sharing. Is there any possible way Jane could accidentally get left at the mall? LOL
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I haven't been to a mall since my girls were younger teens. Don't miss the place but miss the times. Thank you for this. Gretchen