What Did I Come in Here For
Just for fun ~ Mostly Fiction51 total reviews
Comment from gansach
LOL! Have you been watching me? My problem is not so much forgetting why I came in a room, but getting distracted once I get in there. I go to the kitchen to make something to eat, see the dishes in the sink & wash them, empty the garbage, feed the cat, clean off the stove, then--all clean--I walk out without eating anything. Your poem expresses what happens to many of us, I'm sure. It's fun and funny and all too true! Thanks for sharing, Debi! Great job!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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LOL! Have you been watching me? My problem is not so much forgetting why I came in a room, but getting distracted once I get in there. I go to the kitchen to make something to eat, see the dishes in the sink & wash them, empty the garbage, feed the cat, clean off the stove, then--all clean--I walk out without eating anything. Your poem expresses what happens to many of us, I'm sure. It's fun and funny and all too true! Thanks for sharing, Debi! Great job!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Gail, I sure must be watching you. Haha, You are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from LanceHill
Excellent writing. You have penned an example of what so many go through. Always work on memories, it may be all we have left. Have a blessed weekend.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Excellent writing. You have penned an example of what so many go through. Always work on memories, it may be all we have left. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Lance, I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you again.
Debi
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Hi Lance, I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you again.
Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
You've added a spark to my afternoon. This poem is lighthearted, humorous, and true. We've all experienced periodic forgetfulness because we're thinking about so many things. Fortunately, we're all exercising our brain by writing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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You've added a spark to my afternoon. This poem is lighthearted, humorous, and true. We've all experienced periodic forgetfulness because we're thinking about so many things. Fortunately, we're all exercising our brain by writing.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Sweetie, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from nomi338
Huh? Oh yeah, now I remember! Your amusing post hits uncomfortably close to home. At 81, I am proud of my mental capabilities. Oh sure I do forget some things, but surprisingly they are few comparatively speaking. I did not really know about the relatability of writing being good for the memory, but it does make sense. Thank you for that.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Huh? Oh yeah, now I remember! Your amusing post hits uncomfortably close to home. At 81, I am proud of my mental capabilities. Oh sure I do forget some things, but surprisingly they are few comparatively speaking. I did not really know about the relatability of writing being good for the memory, but it does make sense. Thank you for that.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Nomi, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear BBBB
Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
This made me smile as I was reading it and I'm sure there are many, including me, who can relate to this. I hate it when I have something I want to say and then in the next five seconds it's gone and I can't remember it. It always comes back to me hours, or sometimes days later. An entertaining piece, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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This made me smile as I was reading it and I'm sure there are many, including me, who can relate to this. I hate it when I have something I want to say and then in the next five seconds it's gone and I can't remember it. It always comes back to me hours, or sometimes days later. An entertaining piece, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Jacob, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Debi. One of the great conundrums of getting older is, "Was I coming in this door or going out this door?" It appears to be much easier if you don't think about it. Quite funny. I laughed all the way through the poem just like was written about me. Good stuff!
Z
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hello Debi. One of the great conundrums of getting older is, "Was I coming in this door or going out this door?" It appears to be much easier if you don't think about it. Quite funny. I laughed all the way through the poem just like was written about me. Good stuff!
Z
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Robert, you are so awesome and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
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Debi... you are making me blush... You are so welcome... always.
Comment from Sue Smith
It really is fun. It made me laugh as I've certainly gone through plenty of those moments. The structure, with the repetition of the refrain, is particularly effective and I like the little twist to the refrain in the last line. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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It really is fun. It made me laugh as I've certainly gone through plenty of those moments. The structure, with the repetition of the refrain, is particularly effective and I like the little twist to the refrain in the last line. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Sue, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I can relate to turning 69 next month and I have had senior moments lately too it happens as we get older. My wife often looks for the glasses that are on her head!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I can relate to turning 69 next month and I have had senior moments lately too it happens as we get older. My wife often looks for the glasses that are on her head!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Jake, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. hugs, Debi
Comment from F. William Lester
LOL! I know the feeling. I feel your pain. I found a box of kitchen cellophane wrap in the refrigerator yesterday. OMG! But - now I have another story to submit. Thanks for a good laugh, Debi, and have a wonderful day. Frank
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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LOL! I know the feeling. I feel your pain. I found a box of kitchen cellophane wrap in the refrigerator yesterday. OMG! But - now I have another story to submit. Thanks for a good laugh, Debi, and have a wonderful day. Frank
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Frank, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
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My pleasure, Debi. Be well.
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, it's happening more and more. Not sure if my brain is ready to close the door. But being on Fanstory should help my faculties score. lol We're all in the same boat! Just don't want to lose my oars...
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Yes, it's happening more and more. Not sure if my brain is ready to close the door. But being on Fanstory should help my faculties score. lol We're all in the same boat! Just don't want to lose my oars...
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi June, this was a fun one to do. So I am glad everyone had fun with me.
I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you again.
Love, Debi
