Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 20"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Begin Again
Of course, I want to know more about Amber and Jesse and what their relationship has to do with Sami and Noah. At first, I thought if the baby had been a boy...but you closed that door...so now I wait! this was a great chapter with lots of emotions and thoughts on what can and might be. Well don.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Of course, I want to know more about Amber and Jesse and what their relationship has to do with Sami and Noah. At first, I thought if the baby had been a boy...but you closed that door...so now I wait! this was a great chapter with lots of emotions and thoughts on what can and might be. Well don.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A solid chapter, that is written in your classic style. Sure to delight your fans.
notes:
"Last night and this morning we saw no evidence of {illegal aliens.}
_ I do wonder if he would really keep saying that. Rather he would say, threats.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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A solid chapter, that is written in your classic style. Sure to delight your fans.
notes:
"Last night and this morning we saw no evidence of {illegal aliens.}
_ I do wonder if he would really keep saying that. Rather he would say, threats.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I say it because it's not the original threat of the human traffickers. We're done with them so no more problems with them.
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I don't mean you. I mean, is that the language or description (at work, to others) a person in his position would use? In other areas, he is portrayed as very professional.
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Okay, I now understand. I'll think about that. I was worried my readers would get confused. You do have a valid point.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I can't wait to finish this story. It's so good and it is unique from all the other stories I've read. I hope the story has a happy ending. Good luck with it and happy writing!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I can't wait to finish this story. It's so good and it is unique from all the other stories I've read. I hope the story has a happy ending. Good luck with it and happy writing!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I like every chapter but this one has a special way of drawing me in even further to the what-ifs as things continue to move forward. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I like every chapter but this one has a special way of drawing me in even further to the what-ifs as things continue to move forward. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
This is a very interesting chapter where you delve deeper into the relationship between Noah and Sami, and where you introduce a relationship and child between two people who were related to the house they are living in.
I figure you have something up with Amber and Jesse and the baby girl who was born to them. It was a sad story, but life tends to be full of such.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Hi Barbara,
This is a very interesting chapter where you delve deeper into the relationship between Noah and Sami, and where you introduce a relationship and child between two people who were related to the house they are living in.
I figure you have something up with Amber and Jesse and the baby girl who was born to them. It was a sad story, but life tends to be full of such.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.