Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A lifelong process for many, but so necessary for freedom. A beautiful poem with the tone of forgiveness tucked inside. Sending you my best today as always, dear Melissa, and best wishes for the 20 syllable contest.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024

Hi Sally. Thank you. I really appreciate your words and understanding. Hugs!

Melissa

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

This is wise and deep and, quite honestly, perfect. It shows, rather than tells and sets the stage for inspiration. Brilliant entry. I hope to see this in the Winner's Circle. Xoxo

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024

Hello there Rachelle. Thank you. I really appreciate your words and understanding. Hugs!

Melissa

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Forgiveness is an excellent way to cleanse your heart before the bitterness sets in. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024

Thanks so much Mike!!

Melissa