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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Debi, excellent rhymed poem that doesn't sound forced. It flows so well and has a beautiful presentation. I agree with you, with God's help we can overcome anything.

Well done!

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thanks so very much, Marival. Obviously I was struggling with a little anger when I wrote my little rant, so IT was out for a while. Then I remembered to count my blessings. This poem was the fourth I have written when I have been down and having a bad day. I know they happen to everyone but they can only get better when you recognize that someone else always has it worse than you. My mom told me that on her death bed, and I had to scream, Who????

    But she was happy to go home and be with her Lord, so I too try to honor her by being the best person I can be while I am here, no matter the situation, and try to keep looking for the bright side.

    Thanks for being the kind of person who so many look up to. You are a bright shining star to so many.
    Thanks again. Debi
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 09-May-2024
    Anger is a difficult emotion but sometimes it motivate us to go on, there's so much energy in it. I guess using it for a good outcome.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
    Anger does not work well w Christianity so I don't understand it but for now on avoid it. The kind you speak of is scary. I won't go there.
Comment from nancyjam
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I enjoyed reading this one. It speaks of a trust in God to get you over the rough times in your life.The imagery from darkness to light throughout
works so well. God is the light that brings us our of the dark times.
Nancy

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Nancy, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by nancyjam on 08-May-2024
    You're so welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, Jesus is there to make sure we see the light. He is the light. We just need to allow Him to work within us and accept Him as our Lord and Savior. I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Barb, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Debi. What a beautiful picture . I love it. It cheered me up. Brighter days will be coming soon. Jesus is coming back very soon. I enjoyed your poem. I hope you feel better. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Brenda, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
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We all need to be looking for the bright side. It's easy these days to find the dark side and feel blue. It's an effort to find the bright side but well worth it.
Blessings my friend
Janet

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Janet, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from gansach
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Such a hopeful poem with good advice. I know when something has got me worried or down and I feel helpless, praying and turning it over to God is such a relief. And prayers get answered. Your choice of artwork with this poem is beautiful and illustrates it perfectly. Nice rhythm and rhyme also. Great job, Debi!

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Gail, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a great poem you have penned about seeing the bright side. You are so right because Jesus is the One who shows us the light. He is our brought side. I love the artwork you chose to go with your words. And it is so right to keep rebuking the devil and ask God to hold on to our hand. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hello Teri, you are so right, sweetie, and I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
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This is a poem of hope, optimism and the escape from dark thoughts threatening to consume.

'That's when I will dust off my heart
And I'll go where I can confide
'Cause Jesus will help me to start
To once again see the bright side'

Beautifully written, Debbie.

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi there Shirley I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem and me, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from karenina
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Just like that rainbow, we see in the sky, our emotions are comprised of many colors...

Each has a place in our lives...

What you are feeling is real and universal to all of us.

Breathe it in...

Sit with it for a bit...

Exhale...

Jesus understands.

John 11:35: "Jesus wept."

Karenina


 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hey Sweet Pea, how are you doing? I love your few but powerful words for this one. Yes, it is and everyone can certainly relate so that is why I write a bright side poem every once in a while. Thanks for what you said.

    I think if you read it again, it might read better as I always find changes the first day after I post. Thanks again, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
reply by karenina on 09-May-2024
    I read it again...

    A few changes, just as good!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Good advice in this poem. When you're feeling down try to find something good in your life to think about and hang on to. Also, turn to God to change your heart and take away the sadness. Very nice artwork for this piece as well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-May-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Hi Marilyn, I thank you so much for your always lovely review and comments. I appreciate it for this one so much, because it is amazing how a few minutes in prayer can snap you out of it and help you count your blessings.

    Thanks again for your sweet words for my poem, my very dear friend. Love, Debi