Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Chapter 10 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
33 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
This was a most interesting read. Especially about the restrictions and rules and regulations for their kind of industry, if that is a good expression. Just ONE spag...Here's that American thing, again...Noah swallowed. "I don't want to[o].
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This was a most interesting read. Especially about the restrictions and rules and regulations for their kind of industry, if that is a good expression. Just ONE spag...Here's that American thing, again...Noah swallowed. "I don't want to[o].
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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I've fixed that ornery little word. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray that Sami finally understands and can freely express her love for Noah even if he is professionally unable to show his love at the current time. It's great that you have Sarah who is the one who interprets the emotions for these who really need help!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Hooray that Sami finally understands and can freely express her love for Noah even if he is professionally unable to show his love at the current time. It's great that you have Sarah who is the one who interprets the emotions for these who really need help!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Sami will struggle with the feelings. Noah will work hard not to break down. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Your story is progressing well and you certainly have been fleshing out your characters. I admire the way you write out all the details in such a believable manner. I hate to do this, but one teensy weensy typo:
Noah swallowed. "I don't want too. When we returned Saturday-One "o" too many in "too".
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Your story is progressing well and you certainly have been fleshing out your characters. I admire the way you write out all the details in such a believable manner. I hate to do this, but one teensy weensy typo:
Noah swallowed. "I don't want too. When we returned Saturday-One "o" too many in "too".
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Sami will struggle with the feelings. Noah will work hard not to break down. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Your writing is extremely engrossing. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your paragraphing your sitting structure and your presentation is all very well done I wish you the very best for the week and may God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your paragraphing your sitting structure and your presentation is all very well done I wish you the very best for the week and may God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it. HUGS!!
Comment from judiverse
So there's a reward on "Trey's" head? Noah will have to be careful. Sami has such a rigorous exercise routine, but I suspect it's going to lead to trouble. Che must have been angry at finding the dance turned out to be a seniors travelogue. It sounds like the group is taking all possible precautions. Good strategy to have Sami taking a more assertive role in their relationship. Noah is wise to keep in mind what his position is. Very interesting chapter. judi
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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So there's a reward on "Trey's" head? Noah will have to be careful. Sami has such a rigorous exercise routine, but I suspect it's going to lead to trouble. Che must have been angry at finding the dance turned out to be a seniors travelogue. It sounds like the group is taking all possible precautions. Good strategy to have Sami taking a more assertive role in their relationship. Noah is wise to keep in mind what his position is. Very interesting chapter. judi
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Sami will struggle with the feelings. Noah will work hard not to break down. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Thanks for your review and comments. Yes, Noah has to remain professional and not be distracted. If there's a hit out on him, he really has to watch his step. judi
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Barbara, we all do that. The edits never seem to stop. Of course, I always get it wrong anyway, but you always seem to get it just right. This was a great chapter with quite a few revelations. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Oh, Barbara, we all do that. The edits never seem to stop. Of course, I always get it wrong anyway, but you always seem to get it just right. This was a great chapter with quite a few revelations. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Whatever changes you made at the last minute seemed to work, well done! I enjoyed the mixed signals that were being sent and received. It brought life to what seems to be a 'between action' scene. kay
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Whatever changes you made at the last minute seemed to work, well done! I enjoyed the mixed signals that were being sent and received. It brought life to what seems to be a 'between action' scene. kay
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you for this kind review. In this novel there will be quite a few 'mixed signals'.
Comment from BethShelby
Sami is more aggressive in a physical sense that some of your past female romance characters and Noah acts as though this is new experience for him. I seems he is able to control his feeling even though it isn't easy. I'm enjoying the story.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Sami is more aggressive in a physical sense that some of your past female romance characters and Noah acts as though this is new experience for him. I seems he is able to control his feeling even though it isn't easy. I'm enjoying the story.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Because of his position, can't respond. I can promise it changes. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I am very well pleased to know that Sami also has feelings for Noah as well. I would love to see them together as a couple. There will always be challenges as his work would no doubt continue to put his safety in jeopardy, but I am also sure that they will find a way to deal with it. Great story development, and I have a feeling that CHEN may have bitten off more than he will be comfortable chewing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I am very well pleased to know that Sami also has feelings for Noah as well. I would love to see them together as a couple. There will always be challenges as his work would no doubt continue to put his safety in jeopardy, but I am also sure that they will find a way to deal with it. Great story development, and I have a feeling that CHEN may have bitten off more than he will be comfortable chewing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Chen will meet his match. Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
I love that secret kiss. You go Sami!! Way not to be passively waiting for the men to make decisions on intimacy!! She's had so little control over what's happening to her, but this she chose. Looks like Noah enjoyed it as well, hehe.
Great chapter!!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi Barbara,
I love that secret kiss. You go Sami!! Way not to be passively waiting for the men to make decisions on intimacy!! She's had so little control over what's happening to her, but this she chose. Looks like Noah enjoyed it as well, hehe.
Great chapter!!
Rhonda
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Noah did like it. LOL Thank you for the kind review.