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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Your poem told this very wonderful story in a satisfying and memorable way. There is no way to ever pay him back for the sacrifice He made. All we can do is honor Him with everything we do. Great Easter poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hi Gretchen, you are right. Jesus' love for us is the greatest thing ever.
    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of what He did for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
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A well written piece Debi on the sacrifice made by Jesus so that mankind could be forgiven. It is something we all need to remember as Easter approaches. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hi there Jacob, I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is a lovely poem for Easter. Indeed, He is our risen King. Your thoughts are glorifying to Him all the way through. He is , as you said, "The greatest gift to mankind." Thank you for sharing this, dear.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hello dear Verna, and all of your thoughts are usually in sync with me.
    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a beautiful. Although you didn't lay in out that way. it seems to read like verse of a minute poem. Maybe people are writing about Christ and resurection as we near the Easter season. I lovely the melody of Hallellujah. These words or more spiritual that the Cohen version.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Dearest Beth, I do love that version too and thought the video was so powerful. I actually cried watching it.

    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Helvi2
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Hi Debi, This is a lovely poem that was presented at the perfect time. Easter is just around the corner so it fits beautifully with its timing. We all should be reminded of what a giving person Jesus was. Sometimes we fall far from his teachings. You did a wonderful job reminding us of what Jesus gave to all of us! Happy Easter! :o) Helvi

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Sweetie, yes, I was thinking there is never a bad time to write about our Lord and Savior. I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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AMEN!!! You will hear Jesus' voice and His guidance will lead you on a daily basis for the rest of your life. I am so glad I have chosen to walk with God and my guiding light. I couldn't do it without Him. Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to Jesus with us.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Barb, we have made the right choice, haven't we? And I am so thankful to have so many here who have the same love that I do and not afraid to confess their love.

    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Debi, as you know, the power of poetry can often come in a simple format that is easily understood by the reader. Such is the case of this wonderfully written yet simple poem offering a powerful message. Well done, Terry.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Terry, you are so kind. I did want to keep it simple but meaningful. So I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day. Thanks for the generous six stars too, Terry!

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! Great story told about the Lord, His Life, and sacrifice and redemption of all humankind! What a great job you did with the rhyming - with three rhymes for every couplet!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Helen, I always appreciate your views on Christianity and walking with our Lord and Savior. I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day. And thank you for the generous six stars for them too, dear Helen.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Of all the people who have claimed to love us throughout our lives, I wonder just how many of them would have given their lives and died nailed to a cross for our sins? An easy answer. Just one. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Ric, and as always you are so very kind. I don't think there is any bad time to do a poem about Jesus, except maybe April Fools, so I thought I would do my little simple poem a little early, since they are only a day apart.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for the very kind review and words.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Debi, .What a beautiful poem. I really liked it. I often wonder how they could kill him. Some people today mock him and use his name in vain. Written well and I like the picture. The video is good for your poem. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Brenda, I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi