The Remote
A way in which I choose to picture my faith in God..33 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Remotes are full of technology, but my remote is the same as yours. If we have God, we can pray, and He will answer. If our boat sinks, what do we do for comfort? Go down with it or jump out into the water?
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Remotes are full of technology, but my remote is the same as yours. If we have God, we can pray, and He will answer. If our boat sinks, what do we do for comfort? Go down with it or jump out into the water?
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you Rosemary. I really apprecviate your reviw and comment.
Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I thought this was an interesting perspective of your faith right up to "the remote is faith", then it became brilliant.
A very well written piece, Beth, and it tells us everything we need to know about your beliefs in a way anyone can understand.
Good luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I thought this was an interesting perspective of your faith right up to "the remote is faith", then it became brilliant.
A very well written piece, Beth, and it tells us everything we need to know about your beliefs in a way anyone can understand.
Good luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Pam. I am glad yuou like this. I appreciate your remarks.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
What a great metaphorical piece! I like that you give us the life picture as the metaphor of a boat on the sea, and the control is the faith we have in God Who directs us all through life to Him. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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What a great metaphorical piece! I like that you give us the life picture as the metaphor of a boat on the sea, and the control is the faith we have in God Who directs us all through life to Him. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Helen, I'm glad you think my metaphore works.
Beth
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Thank you so much Helen, I'm glad you think my metaphor works.
Beth
Comment from royowen
There's one thing that blesses, there's a few on fanstory that know their treasure , and all their wealth is in faith in Christ, and their revelation is pure, I thank God for you Beth, Helen, Sally and quite a few others who share my belief, mostly female, but then most on site are female, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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There's one thing that blesses, there's a few on fanstory that know their treasure , and all their wealth is in faith in Christ, and their revelation is pure, I thank God for you Beth, Helen, Sally and quite a few others who share my belief, mostly female, but then most on site are female, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you Roy. I really appreciate that affirmation that you feel we are right with the Lord. I truely appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely analogy. The metaphor of the sea being life is always a great one and I like the idea of the remote being faith, guiding us towards our destiny. I don't ever (want) to be without my remote. Good luck, Beth! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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A lovely analogy. The metaphor of the sea being life is always a great one and I like the idea of the remote being faith, guiding us towards our destiny. I don't ever (want) to be without my remote. Good luck, Beth! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you Debbie. I glad you like this mataphor. I enjoyefd your remarks.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Flash Fiction contest entry with us. Yes, by the power of prayer we have that remote to guide us through this journey of live. I can't imagine attempting it by myself. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you for sharing this Flash Fiction contest entry with us. Yes, by the power of prayer we have that remote to guide us through this journey of live. I can't imagine attempting it by myself. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I really appreciate the review and nice commrents.
Beth
Comment from damommy
How lovely this is, and yet so simply put for anyone to understand. You have such a beautiful way with words. Thank you for sharing this one especially.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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How lovely this is, and yet so simply put for anyone to understand. You have such a beautiful way with words. Thank you for sharing this one especially.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Yvette. I'm glad you like my way of expressing it and find it easy to understand. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever post Beth, you made your faithful journey easy to understand as that guiding star is important and it is interesting you mention material things that impede your journey and weigh you down, I understand this and your post is magical and interesting and I have just one six stars left and it was made for you love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is a clever post Beth, you made your faithful journey easy to understand as that guiding star is important and it is interesting you mention material things that impede your journey and weigh you down, I understand this and your post is magical and interesting and I have just one six stars left and it was made for you love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you Dolly. I glad you feel that I got my point across. I really appreciate you giveing me you last six stars.
Beth
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You are welcome Beth, well deserved x
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is so perfect! I love the wording you use. It makes so much sense and is so true! I love the way it flows as well.
I love your poems! Great job with this one!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is so perfect! I love the wording you use. It makes so much sense and is so true! I love the way it flows as well.
I love your poems! Great job with this one!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad this makes sense to you. I appareciate your review.
Comment from papa55mike
To navigate alone in this world or sea is a dangerous situation. Without the following presence of our Savior, there's no hope. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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To navigate alone in this world or sea is a dangerous situation. Without the following presence of our Savior, there's no hope. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Mike. I appreciate your review and comments I glad you like this way of expressing faith. Thank you for the six stars.
Beth