Comment from zanya

Exceptional

I read and reread this poem narrated with language of sadness and loss but with Hope and Trust firmly built in to its scaffolding -Grief is everything you describe and more with the sub heading reminding us of just how long its stay can be when it takes up residence-

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you for your thoughtful and understanding review Zanya. I greatly appreciate your encouraging thoughts and the special stars.
Blessings
Janet

Comment from patcelaw

Average

You need to go back and check your work because your poetry or whatever it was, you were writing does not appear to be there. I hope you can get it fixed so that we can read it.

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you - I got a new computer and I?m still working on learning the changes.

reply by patcelaw on 03-Dec-2023

I understand I got a new iPad and I?m still having a bit of a problem working with it as well. I hope you can get it corrected.

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thanks Patricia. I think I figured it out but now I can't get the spacing between the lines to be closer. I hate getting new computers or phones. Even if I don't get a new one, they keep upgrading and that changes things and I'm at their mercy anyway.

Hope you're having a great day.
I think I'll take a nap. 😊