The Design
Wanting to be someone else.36 total reviews
Comment from GentleWind
I am so thrilled about the theme of this poetry! It is sorely needed.
Great rhythm and rhyme! The artwork was perfect and so was the visuals this poem elicited. Great job! More! More! More!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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I am so thrilled about the theme of this poetry! It is sorely needed.
Great rhythm and rhyme! The artwork was perfect and so was the visuals this poem elicited. Great job! More! More! More!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you for being my cheerleader! I'm glad you thought everything melded together well. I appreciate this encouragement so much!
Tina
Comment from gramalot8
I really love the message in your poem. I feel blessed to have the faith I do have in the blessings from my Heavenly Father . Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I really love the message in your poem. I feel blessed to have the faith I do have in the blessings from my Heavenly Father . Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I appreciate this review and best wishes. Have a great week!
Tina
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are custom made by God and God doesn't make mistakes. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I don't want to get political, but my brain immediately went there. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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We are custom made by God and God doesn't make mistakes. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I don't want to get political, but my brain immediately went there. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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That would've been a good thing to put in there, about God not making mistakes, but you're probably right, too political.Youre also right that He's always right! Thanks!
Comment from Navada
I loved your choice of artwork for this piece and the accompanying message about understanding our personal individuality and value, as created by God. This is a lovely use of rhyme to convey an uplifting theme. Good luck for the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I loved your choice of artwork for this piece and the accompanying message about understanding our personal individuality and value, as created by God. This is a lovely use of rhyme to convey an uplifting theme. Good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thanks for saying it was uplifting. That tells me how you overall see it. That's always nice to know!
Comment from Wendyanne
What a wonderful well written piece of rhyming poetry Tina. I really like the message that you have conveyed so effectively in the last stanza,
"So if you start to doubt your worth,
remember what is true.
You're custom-made by God alone,
to be uniquely you."
Beautiful!!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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What a wonderful well written piece of rhyming poetry Tina. I really like the message that you have conveyed so effectively in the last stanza,
"So if you start to doubt your worth,
remember what is true.
You're custom-made by God alone,
to be uniquely you."
Beautiful!!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much Wendy. I'm glad you liked the rhyme and message. This means a lot.
Comment from Jacob1395
Your poem definitely has an important message to share. We are all unique and we all have a purpose here on this earth, this is what I truly believe. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Your poem definitely has an important message to share. We are all unique and we all have a purpose here on this earth, this is what I truly believe. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Jacob, for these kind words. It's a joy to write and have someone "get it."
Thank you:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the first verse with the
contrast between the oak and pine.
-A good transition to God and
a truth you find amazing.
-You make a very good point in verse three,
and have a very good message in the
concluding verse about being who you are,
and not doubting your worth.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the first verse with the
contrast between the oak and pine.
-A good transition to God and
a truth you find amazing.
-You make a very good point in verse three,
and have a very good message in the
concluding verse about being who you are,
and not doubting your worth.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you, sweet Pam:) Your reviews are a gift of insight.
Tina
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You are very very welcome, Tina. Your writing inspires my review!
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Aw, thanks! I 'm grateful for you:)
Comment from Lisasview
Okay, found another poem that you have written Tina...with every other line rhyming...
You seem to enjoy writing and that is always a good thing... doing what you really love.
Lisasview...in Spain
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Okay, found another poem that you have written Tina...with every other line rhyming...
You seem to enjoy writing and that is always a good thing... doing what you really love.
Lisasview...in Spain
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Hello, Lisa from Spain! Nice to meet you. I DO love to write, as you may also. Thank you for your thoughts here. Doing what you love reallty is such a joy and privilege !
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I agree...
Lisa
Comment from Wendy G
What an encouraging poem, full of truth and wisdom. The rhyme is silky and the flow is just as smooth. Very well done. It's a great entry for the rhyming poem contest. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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What an encouraging poem, full of truth and wisdom. The rhyme is silky and the flow is just as smooth. Very well done. It's a great entry for the rhyming poem contest. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Wendy,
Good morning! It's so nice of you to review my little poem. I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
I like that very nice! I wonderful for ode to God as well! The first line of your poem is my favorite. The mirror says hey you can't ignore me for long. Lovely poem and a great submission. I see no issues with esthetics sentence structure or grammar the great entry. I wish you best a lot to have a good night!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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I like that very nice! I wonderful for ode to God as well! The first line of your poem is my favorite. The mirror says hey you can't ignore me for long. Lovely poem and a great submission. I see no issues with esthetics sentence structure or grammar the great entry. I wish you best a lot to have a good night!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your thoughts and review! I hope to stop by and read your work soon! I appreciate your phrase, "ode to God." That's lovely!