Remembering...
A nostalgic glimpse into the past.34 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Lovely remembrance, and very romantic, Beth. Great overall presentation - I like the soft lighting in the image. Good luck with the Cinquain contest.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Lovely remembrance, and very romantic, Beth. Great overall presentation - I like the soft lighting in the image. Good luck with the Cinquain contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Pam. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from JSD
Aww. That's sweet, Beth. Surely this will do well. Love the careful linking of the candle to the scent to the song. It works really well without punctuation. Good luck. X
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Aww. That's sweet, Beth. Surely this will do well. Love the careful linking of the candle to the scent to the song. It works really well without punctuation. Good luck. X
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from karenina
Oh so elegant Cinquain! The "S" alliteration is an added layer of finesse.
Great color choice to accompany your image, as well.
Sweet and seductive!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Oh so elegant Cinquain! The "S" alliteration is an added layer of finesse.
Great color choice to accompany your image, as well.
Sweet and seductive!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Karenia. I'm enjoying your comments. I appreciate hearing form you.
Beth
Comment from Navada
I like the way you've explored multiple senses here in just a few short lines. You've used the cinquain form perfectly and your chosen words, along with the accompanying image, create a sense of warmth and safety. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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I like the way you've explored multiple senses here in just a few short lines. You've used the cinquain form perfectly and your chosen words, along with the accompanying image, create a sense of warmth and safety. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for the nice comments and the review.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured Cinquain that left me feeling soothed and filled with love and the aroma here has touched my senses, a magical post Beth, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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This is a sweet natured Cinquain that left me feeling soothed and filled with love and the aroma here has touched my senses, a magical post Beth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I'm pleased it made you feel that way.
Beth
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh, that's so beautiful the gorgeous text you chose. The lovely picture and your word choices make a beautiful package this is very lovely. Romantic too. There is no line that I could pick that would be my favorite because the whole thing is a fine package. Don't see any issues with grammar or sentence structure or esthetics or subject matter, you've done a really good job and made a fine submission best of luck to you. I hope you're having a good night!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Oh, that's so beautiful the gorgeous text you chose. The lovely picture and your word choices make a beautiful package this is very lovely. Romantic too. There is no line that I could pick that would be my favorite because the whole thing is a fine package. Don't see any issues with grammar or sentence structure or esthetics or subject matter, you've done a really good job and made a fine submission best of luck to you. I hope you're having a good night!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Lea. I don't usually do contests for short poems but I need to practice because this site seems to ask for them often.
Beth
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Such a tender poem, Beth. It radiates the love you've felt for someone you've lost. Presumably, I guess, your husband. Simply put, but covers years of memories.
Take care, my friend,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Such a tender poem, Beth. It radiates the love you've felt for someone you've lost. Presumably, I guess, your husband. Simply put, but covers years of memories.
Take care, my friend,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Rhonda. Yes, I was feeling nostalgic about my husband who has been gone over six years now. I have so many good memories.
Beth
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I felt that through the poem, and you don't express that hurt often!
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He was nine years older than me and I knew it was likely he would go first but we had 61 wonderful years together.
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Very clever. It is you with all the power to change things rather than DED>
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Wow, you were truly blessed to have had 61 years together!!!!
Comment from Wendy G
Warm, serene, filled with love, and with lots of sensory appeal. All are supported by the image and presentation. Excellent cinquain. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Warm, serene, filled with love, and with lots of sensory appeal. All are supported by the image and presentation. Excellent cinquain. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Wendy. I appreciate the review and comments
Beth
Comment from Teri7
Beth, This is a very beautiful and very well written Cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used very lovely and descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I love the smell of sandalwood. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Beth, This is a very beautiful and very well written Cinquain poem you have penned for the contest. You used very lovely and descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I love the smell of sandalwood. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Teri. I'm pleased you like it. I guess I feeling a little nostalgic as I remember the times gone by.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a great day and may God bless you. Thanks for caring for us. The donation.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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This is a very good entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a great day and may God bless you. Thanks for caring for us. The donation.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Pat. I appreciate the review.
Beth
