Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from royowen
A very clever narrative Jim, I love the fact that gold dust is the element to spread His goodness over the earth, the moon and the stars, but of course they have their own star dust, the gold being a literal metaphor for turning dust into gold, beautifully written free verse, my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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A very clever narrative Jim, I love the fact that gold dust is the element to spread His goodness over the earth, the moon and the stars, but of course they have their own star dust, the gold being a literal metaphor for turning dust into gold, beautifully written free verse, my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Smiles of gladness, thanks Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from Renata Carmen
What a lovely freestyle poem! I have always been deeply fascinated by space. It's pretty wild when you stop and think about the fact that we're on a giant rock spinning through space, surrounded by other giant balls of rock, and ice, and fire! I also love the concept of dust being a sort of scared, ancient thing -- it makes me feel a bit better about the dust bunnies in my corners! ;) Cheers!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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What a lovely freestyle poem! I have always been deeply fascinated by space. It's pretty wild when you stop and think about the fact that we're on a giant rock spinning through space, surrounded by other giant balls of rock, and ice, and fire! I also love the concept of dust being a sort of scared, ancient thing -- it makes me feel a bit better about the dust bunnies in my corners! ;) Cheers!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Smiling back Renata!
Comment from John Ciarmello
I loved this free verse it covers it all, from the conception of our world to the stars being the home of the Angels and God having His hand in it all. Beautifully written, JLR. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I loved this free verse it covers it all, from the conception of our world to the stars being the home of the Angels and God having His hand in it all. Beautifully written, JLR. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Blessings back to you in abdundance JohnC!
Comment from Heather Knight
Wow! This is beautiful and you seem to be as fond of alliteration as I am (the difference being you know how to use it).
There's just one tiny thing I'd change. I'd write Earth starting with a capital e.
I like the whole poem, but the fourth line is glorious.
Thanks for sharing,
MJ
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Wow! This is beautiful and you seem to be as fond of alliteration as I am (the difference being you know how to use it).
There's just one tiny thing I'd change. I'd write Earth starting with a capital e.
I like the whole poem, but the fourth line is glorious.
Thanks for sharing,
MJ
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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MJ - wow! Thank you and Earth it shall be. You kind words are so appreciated.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is an interesting take. I think it would be a great bedtime story or even lullaby for kids at night.
Very nicely done. Keep up the good work Poet!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This is an interesting take. I think it would be a great bedtime story or even lullaby for kids at night.
Very nicely done. Keep up the good work Poet!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Sir!
Comment from susand3022
Hi J, that was kind of cool, going through creation, then having the angels sprinkling gold dust on everything... I really liked that part. What was really unexpected though, and I liked it very much, was the little uplift at the end, as when you're in the clouds, the angels will still sprinkle gold dust on your day to brighten things up. :) Totally made me smile.
Have a gold-dusted day! :)
Susan
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Hi J, that was kind of cool, going through creation, then having the angels sprinkling gold dust on everything... I really liked that part. What was really unexpected though, and I liked it very much, was the little uplift at the end, as when you're in the clouds, the angels will still sprinkle gold dust on your day to brighten things up. :) Totally made me smile.
Have a gold-dusted day! :)
Susan
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you Susan! 🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Sanku
I liked the way you handled creation ,especially the moon and the stars. Angels sprinkling gold dust over the universe is such a divine as well as a romantic idea. Thanks for sharing.
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I liked the way you handled creation ,especially the moon and the stars. Angels sprinkling gold dust over the universe is such a divine as well as a romantic idea. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from pome lover
very nice and interesting, your way with words and free verse.
You gave "dust" varied meanings (cosmic dust ball, and dust storms - silver satin )and ended with a positive and expressive thought. We could certainly use some angels sprinkling gold dust to brighten things up!
Good entry.
Katharine
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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very nice and interesting, your way with words and free verse.
You gave "dust" varied meanings (cosmic dust ball, and dust storms - silver satin )and ended with a positive and expressive thought. We could certainly use some angels sprinkling gold dust to brighten things up!
Good entry.
Katharine
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you and I do agree fully! We do need some Angels sprinkling gol dust on the world.