Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Old Has Been"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your twenty-five words to describe the
flights of fancy and certain desires of raunchy old men. LOL! Some old women are that way too! :-)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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You have made effective use of your twenty-five words to describe the
flights of fancy and certain desires of raunchy old men. LOL! Some old women are that way too! :-)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Smiling back.
Comment from Janet Foor
Lol! This is a fun poem with a lot of truth in it. My grumpy old man certainly is not a 'has been' and I wouldn't think of treating his as one.
Thanks for the smiles.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Lol! This is a fun poem with a lot of truth in it. My grumpy old man certainly is not a 'has been' and I wouldn't think of treating his as one.
Thanks for the smiles.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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With a big smile back! Thanks for the review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Old Has Been ', is a well-written and entertaining piece. I'm still smiling as I pen this review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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'Old Has Been ', is a well-written and entertaining piece. I'm still smiling as I pen this review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking a moment to read and comment on this little bit of fun.
It was an absolute pleasure.
Comment from royowen
I'm one of those old men, and I certainly don't want to be thought I'm incapable, it hurts the "young man" that still dwells within us,this is beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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I'm one of those old men, and I certainly don't want to be thought I'm incapable, it hurts the "young man" that still dwells within us,this is beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Age is a mind thing - staying on top of our game is ageless activity.
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I agree
Comment from jessizero
You told a great story in just 25 words. Your message is very true. Thank you for choosing to share it here on FanStory. Keep up the good work, and best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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You told a great story in just 25 words. Your message is very true. Thank you for choosing to share it here on FanStory. Keep up the good work, and best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Earl Corp
I have to give a six stars rating to anyone that can make all the lines rhyme in a twenty five word poem. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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I have to give a six stars rating to anyone that can make all the lines rhyme in a twenty five word poem. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Earl, thanks for the extra boost!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, Old Has Been, has the proper word count and sends out the groan when one's exterior makes one look like a geezer who would only have a woman around if she was his nurse.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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This twenty-five-word poem, Old Has Been, has the proper word count and sends out the groan when one's exterior makes one look like a geezer who would only have a woman around if she was his nurse.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Bill that is more real than otherwise for certain 👍👍
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, yesterday is only a memory. They can only dream about the past. You have a great notion in the storyline
Thank you for sharing this poem. Have a great day.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, yesterday is only a memory. They can only dream about the past. You have a great notion in the storyline
Thank you for sharing this poem. Have a great day.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Smiling back!
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Have a great day.