Trysts at Dawn
ABC Poetry33 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Most ABC poetry can seem forced but you not only made your poem flow smoothly but you created a very vivid scenario with your well chosen words. Don
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Most ABC poetry can seem forced but you not only made your poem flow smoothly but you created a very vivid scenario with your well chosen words. Don
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Hello Don. Thank you so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image, Melissa.
-You wrote a very good
poem with a good topic
and effective imagery.
-My favorite line is the second one.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the sunrise, and
the beginning of a new day.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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-Lovely image, Melissa.
-You wrote a very good
poem with a good topic
and effective imagery.
-My favorite line is the second one.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the sunrise, and
the beginning of a new day.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hi Pam. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa.
Comment from zanya
Such a beautiful time of day, 'early dawn' celebrated here with all it's newness and promise of what is to come - enhanced with 'trysts shared with my muse'
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Such a beautiful time of day, 'early dawn' celebrated here with all it's newness and promise of what is to come - enhanced with 'trysts shared with my muse'
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much Zanya!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Just beautiful, your words tell of a whole day/days in a few lines, an excellent abc poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Just beautiful, your words tell of a whole day/days in a few lines, an excellent abc poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hello kahpot... thanks so very much!! Btw, I feel like you may have told me your name in the past, but it has slipped my mind ... sorry... could you share it with me again? :)
Melissa
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Certainly Melissa, my name is Kym-the male version Ha! Ha!
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Thank you Kym... I am acquainted with two gentlemen who share your name. :). My father is named Carroll... the male version ;). M
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written ABC poem. It has a nice rhyme. Very beautiful photo as well to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written ABC poem. It has a nice rhyme. Very beautiful photo as well to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hi Joanne. Thank you for your lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely poem about moments shared. I'll bet the ideas flowed after that, inspired by the beauty around you. A great contest entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck. :)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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This is a lovely poem about moments shared. I'll bet the ideas flowed after that, inspired by the beauty around you. A great contest entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck. :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hello Sharon... thanks so much for your lovely comments!! :)
Melissa
Comment from Susan Larson
What a lovely ABC poem with all five lines in alphabetical order! I absolutely love your final line! "Enchanting trysts shared with my muse."
Wishing you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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What a lovely ABC poem with all five lines in alphabetical order! I absolutely love your final line! "Enchanting trysts shared with my muse."
Wishing you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hello Susan. Thanks so very much. :)
Melissa
Comment from Raul1
It is interesting that you included the summer in your ABCD poem. I can vision the sunshine reflected in the river. I think that it's written well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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It is interesting that you included the summer in your ABCD poem. I can vision the sunshine reflected in the river. I think that it's written well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hello Raul. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your comments on this ABC poem. :)
Melissa
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You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your muse here is the early morning dewy dawn with those bedazzled drops that quench the plants and flowers bringing life into view here, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Your muse here is the early morning dewy dawn with those bedazzled drops that quench the plants and flowers bringing life into view here, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hi Dolly. Thanks so much. I had fun, but that ABC sequence really challenged me today. :)
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
A splendid little ABC at the dawning of the day. Is early dawn a tautology? Dawn is an event occurring at a specific time. Can it, therefore, be early or for that matter late? just a thought. Cloudless perhaps if you feel it needs a double syllable to preserve its rhythm or chilly perhaps.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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A splendid little ABC at the dawning of the day. Is early dawn a tautology? Dawn is an event occurring at a specific time. Can it, therefore, be early or for that matter late? just a thought. Cloudless perhaps if you feel it needs a double syllable to preserve its rhythm or chilly perhaps.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Hi Jim. Thanks!! trying to set a scene of those very early beams of sunlight. :). Hope you are doing wonderfully well.
Melissa
