Leander
poem204 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
Sawyer look here a bit like this evil boy in the story poem. Nice story with ABAB rhyme all the way. At the end his mother stops the boy doing more harm by putting him in bed. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Sawyer look here a bit like this evil boy in the story poem. Nice story with ABAB rhyme all the way. At the end his mother stops the boy doing more harm by putting him in bed. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Ine, thank you, my friend. Yep, I love his evil raised eyebrow :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem about the evil boy who was ordered to bed by his mother. sawyer looks a little ticked off, lol. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem about the evil boy who was ordered to bed by his mother. sawyer looks a little ticked off, lol. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thank you so very much, sweetwoodjax :-) Brooke
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you're welcome, brooke.
I just posted a poem about Mama.
I would be honored if you could
review it for me.
Comment from the blue pixel
This gorgeous tall tale about a not so tall little monkey is absolutely precious. I can't think of a better word. It is riddled with innovative rhymes; "prove it"-"removed it", "pickles"-"tickles", "snatch them"-"hatch them" - every end rhyme really. I found myself smiling in your first stanza, matching your words with that oh so evil look in Leander's eyes. Could there possibly be a more evil child on the face of the earth - (with the face of an angel and not a wicked thought in his pretty little head, of course). Mum might cause Leander an "upheaval" but if this poem doesn't win the contest, there ought to be an upheaval of another kind. I loved it. xx Carol
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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This gorgeous tall tale about a not so tall little monkey is absolutely precious. I can't think of a better word. It is riddled with innovative rhymes; "prove it"-"removed it", "pickles"-"tickles", "snatch them"-"hatch them" - every end rhyme really. I found myself smiling in your first stanza, matching your words with that oh so evil look in Leander's eyes. Could there possibly be a more evil child on the face of the earth - (with the face of an angel and not a wicked thought in his pretty little head, of course). Mum might cause Leander an "upheaval" but if this poem doesn't win the contest, there ought to be an upheaval of another kind. I loved it. xx Carol
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Carol, thank you so very much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this story about my evil grandson. LOL His mother tells me he has come into his "naughty" phase. :-) Currently, he is enjoying the art of throwing food, even the foods he likes. LOL Brooke
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Oh no. Not the food throwing phase. My little darling used to spit it in my face but as soon as I gave up carefully steaming and mashing everything myself and bought canned stuff, she just loved it and ate it instead of throwing it at her well intentioned mother. lol xx
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His favorite food is blueberries, and he is even enjoying throwing them LOL
I think part of the problem is that while Miranda really does do her best to give him looks of disapproval and uses her "tone" as she calls it, he can still tell he is entertaining her ;-)
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Kids no"the tone" that doesn't really mean business and "the tone" that does. lol xx
Comment from Pili Pubul
That Photo!!! Speak a thousand words, and you found them and wrote a masterpiece that had me laughing first thing in the morning., four stanza did it to me LOL. Love it, poetic, funny, and written in perfect style. Pili
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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That Photo!!! Speak a thousand words, and you found them and wrote a masterpiece that had me laughing first thing in the morning., four stanza did it to me LOL. Love it, poetic, funny, and written in perfect style. Pili
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Isn't it a cool photo? LOL Thank you so very much, Pili, for your great review and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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To capture that expression !!! Amazing photographer ...