Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

Wonderful as usual.

tJack (Jack) shook his head, but the thought of stretching out on his own mattress, snuggling under the quilt that smelled like his wife, grew bigger in his mind.

Tears sprung to his dark eyes and he repeated quietly, "I wish we wouldn't have helped.
"(helped.")

You have Lain, 'Lane, and Laine spellings. Are all correct?


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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Thanks, Rebecca. I fixed Jack and I fixed Laine, Lane, 'Laine. lol.
Be blessed,
Deb

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 09-Jul-2020

Happy to help.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

So Cody is still fighting the poison and the people who saved them are under attack too. When this nightmare will end Thank you for sharing and have a blessed day.

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Thank you for your continued encouragement, Iza!
Blessings,
Deb