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Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Trouble Follows -- part 2"Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.
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Comment from royowen
When one encounters pure evil, I guess it will mean you're gazing into the eyes of Satan I'm sure, I think Jack would almost enjoy making this a revenge thing. Just love this chapter, it's a good thing and ability to describe action things, but I know somehow there'll be a antidote somehow. Well done Deb. Great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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When one encounters pure evil, I guess it will mean you're gazing into the eyes of Satan I'm sure, I think Jack would almost enjoy making this a revenge thing. Just love this chapter, it's a good thing and ability to describe action things, but I know somehow there'll be a antidote somehow. Well done Deb. Great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Roy. Yep, it is, indeed, like looking into the eyes of satan. Scary as can be. But God is always stronger, always bigger.
I appreciate you, as always. :)
Blessings,
Deb
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You're a gift Deb
Comment from lancellot
A very chilling and impressive chapter. I have to admit, I could not have held my anger back, I would have blown a kneecap or two and then, I would have let the evil out. That's how perfect this chapter was written. You transferred all the emotions to the reader.
Perfect.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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A very chilling and impressive chapter. I have to admit, I could not have held my anger back, I would have blown a kneecap or two and then, I would have let the evil out. That's how perfect this chapter was written. You transferred all the emotions to the reader.
Perfect.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate both your words and your exceptional rating. :) And I'd have taken a kneecap or two out, myself. :)
I appreciate you so much,
Deb
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Interesting and something new, mystic and daring crime fiction, I like and enjoyed the read, the plot development, realistic dialogues and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Interesting and something new, mystic and daring crime fiction, I like and enjoyed the read, the plot development, realistic dialogues and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi Alcreator! I'll be adding the next bit of the chapter tonight, if all goes well. I do so appreciate you reading and reviewing. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Oh, my. What a heart wrenching place to cliff-hang me. There is so much action in this story. I felt like I was in the room watching every detail as they unfolded. Well done again!
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Oh, my. What a heart wrenching place to cliff-hang me. There is so much action in this story. I felt like I was in the room watching every detail as they unfolded. Well done again!
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Rebecca! After I finish writing a chapter, I am emotionally exhausted and have to either walk the dog out in the sunshine or take a nap. lol. Of course, the dog is loving this book! lol.
Appreciate you reading, reviewing and enjoying!
Blessings,
Deb
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It does take the starch out of you when writing!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh, my God, poor Cody and Jack, they have no break. even the hospital is not safe. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter and with your writings.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Oh, my God, poor Cody and Jack, they have no break. even the hospital is not safe. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter and with your writings.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Iza! Appreciate your reading and commenting. :)
Happy Canada Day (I think I missed it, but I hope it was awesome for you!)
Blessings,
Deb