Looking for Orion - 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Investigation - part 2"Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice chapter, now that Cody is literary out of the woods, the mystery starts to unfold a little. So the bad guys are just killing for fun and they are not stopping there. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Nice chapter, now that Cody is literary out of the woods, the mystery starts to unfold a little. So the bad guys are just killing for fun and they are not stopping there. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Iza!
Always appreciate you.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from roof35
This is absolutely riveting and absolutely frightening. As you can see, your writing is so well done that it has me on pins and needles. I will be looking for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This is absolutely riveting and absolutely frightening. As you can see, your writing is so well done that it has me on pins and needles. I will be looking for the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you Root! That's so encouraging to hear. I'll try to get you off the pins soon. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling tale--skillfully told--suspense--tension--horror--terror--you hit all the hot spots. Excellent dialog, sounds believable, meticulous descriptions. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Chilling tale--skillfully told--suspense--tension--horror--terror--you hit all the hot spots. Excellent dialog, sounds believable, meticulous descriptions. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Liz! I appreciate you kind words.
Be blessed,
Debby
Comment from royowen
So, a guy from the FBI calls in to see Cody, to obtain information about these awful dudes who do horrid things for a living, and discover they're really dangerous, all blond, like the FBI bloke. Things are really hotting up, and Cody is nowhere near healed yet. Beautifully written my friend. Beautifully written, great episode Deb. Blessings, Roy
Typo "We came to nearly lost you." Close to nearly losing you?
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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So, a guy from the FBI calls in to see Cody, to obtain information about these awful dudes who do horrid things for a living, and discover they're really dangerous, all blond, like the FBI bloke. Things are really hotting up, and Cody is nowhere near healed yet. Beautifully written my friend. Beautifully written, great episode Deb. Blessings, Roy
Typo "We came to nearly lost you." Close to nearly losing you?
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Hi Roy. Thank you.
Texas vernacular. Was it confusing? We DO have that effect on people. lol
Be blessed,
Debby
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Nah you?re fine. Haven?t been to Texas, have you received the package yet?