Looking for Orion - 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Best Laid Plans: part 2"Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.
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Comment from Puzzle
I got lost in this chapter. And I mean that in a good way. Especially the part describing the children's photo with their heads on the looney toons characters. It was like I stopped "reading" and I was just visualizing. I love the relationship between cody and Jack. I love how you put the descriptions of them in causally as they are having a lighthearted conversation. you do this so well. It flows so nicely. Great job on this!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I got lost in this chapter. And I mean that in a good way. Especially the part describing the children's photo with their heads on the looney toons characters. It was like I stopped "reading" and I was just visualizing. I love the relationship between cody and Jack. I love how you put the descriptions of them in causally as they are having a lighthearted conversation. you do this so well. It flows so nicely. Great job on this!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Oh, Dana! Thank you. I"m so honored that you found this exceptional. :)
I already sent a message, so I"ll keep this short. :)
Be safe and blessed,
Deb