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Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU
A true depiction of the unseen scars after a traumatic experience. That was well captured in this scenario. I am ok with the work. I would pass it.
Keep on the good work.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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A true depiction of the unseen scars after a traumatic experience. That was well captured in this scenario. I am ok with the work. I would pass it.
Keep on the good work.
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Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you, Chanya. I appreciate your kind words. Hope you'll join us for the remainder of the novel. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Again, spread of the single day, but it broke Jack and nearly broke them all, everything stays, as if nothing was to change; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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Again, spread of the single day, but it broke Jack and nearly broke them all, everything stays, as if nothing was to change; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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Thanks, Alcreator! Getting caught up on reading, so I hope you've posted! :)
Be blessed,
Deb