A Fly on the Wall
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Workplace Conscientiousness"A journal musings and assessments about situations
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Comment from light
I simply love this. What's funny is that while I was reading my daughter stuck her head in my door and said "I'm going to the dollar store. I have given up on trying to figure out why people do and say stupid stuff.
Blessings,
Elaine
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
I simply love this. What's funny is that while I was reading my daughter stuck her head in my door and said "I'm going to the dollar store. I have given up on trying to figure out why people do and say stupid stuff.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I like what Maxine, the Senior citizen cartoon character says: "I've stopped saying 'How stupid can you be?' because people are taking it as a challenge."
The timing of your daughter's announcement was classic stuff. (Did you share with her what could possibly be awaiting her there?)
xo
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I didn?t get a chance to tell her that prices are not marked.
Elaine
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Oh boy. She could be in very big trouble.
Comment from DonandVicki
I love it!!! As a joke, I too asked a pretty cashier "How much is this" at a dollar store. I think she must have know it was a come on and she looked at me like...Really? A funny story and memory.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
I love it!!! As a joke, I too asked a pretty cashier "How much is this" at a dollar store. I think she must have know it was a come on and she looked at me like...Really? A funny story and memory.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Hahaha. That took guts. I commend you!
Thanks for the very fun review. xo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah, Rachelle!
What a hoot!
I was with you from the moment your story began, and I can tell you with full assurance that if the two of us went shopping together, and this sort of situation presented itself, we would not be allowed back in the store!
Good grief!
Great fun!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
Hah, Rachelle!
What a hoot!
I was with you from the moment your story began, and I can tell you with full assurance that if the two of us went shopping together, and this sort of situation presented itself, we would not be allowed back in the store!
Good grief!
Great fun!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Oh, you are SOO right, Diane!! I love that thought! xo
Comment from Mark Valentine
"if I'm honest, I think it may have hung there in parentheses" - what a fantastic line! I think I must hang a lot of phrases in parentheses when I'm in line behind certain types at the grocery store...but I digress.
Yes, a sense of humor is a great thing to have in this world - thanks for sharing yours.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
"if I'm honest, I think it may have hung there in parentheses" - what a fantastic line! I think I must hang a lot of phrases in parentheses when I'm in line behind certain types at the grocery store...but I digress.
Yes, a sense of humor is a great thing to have in this world - thanks for sharing yours.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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And thanks for appreciating it...and contributing yours into the mix, too, with this very fun review. xo
Comment from doggymad1
Oh my goodness, I would have burst out laughing. Intelligence is very scarce these days. Well told as always with just a hint of a swear word or two.
This one should amuse you. Hubby went to see doctor last Friday with a chest infection. She put the stethoscope on his chest he began to breathe in and out deeply as per routine. The doctor (a locum) got quite annoyed with him. "will you stop doing that," she said. "You are making a noise."
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
Oh my goodness, I would have burst out laughing. Intelligence is very scarce these days. Well told as always with just a hint of a swear word or two.
This one should amuse you. Hubby went to see doctor last Friday with a chest infection. She put the stethoscope on his chest he began to breathe in and out deeply as per routine. The doctor (a locum) got quite annoyed with him. "will you stop doing that," she said. "You are making a noise."
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Oyyyy!!
Comment from Irish Rain
I wish this was in a contest.
It's hilarious, so very real.
How many times have I thought I
was helping someone, only to have
it blow up in my face.
That 'B' word hangs in the air a lot, ha ha.
Wonderful!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
I wish this was in a contest.
It's hilarious, so very real.
How many times have I thought I
was helping someone, only to have
it blow up in my face.
That 'B' word hangs in the air a lot, ha ha.
Wonderful!
Blessings...
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this delightful review, Irish Rain! I have many times when the B-word hangs in the air, too. Just one more service I offer. xo
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Ha ha...love it!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about the dollar store where the clerk are not sure about the price of all the items when it is one or two for a dollar, testing the customers patience to the brink.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
A very well-written flash fiction about the dollar store where the clerk are not sure about the price of all the items when it is one or two for a dollar, testing the customers patience to the brink.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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You got it.
Comment from the13thpoet
Good Monday afternoon Rahcelle. I think if they gave out common sense for free, most people still wouldn't have it. I think she got agitated cause she was sure she was going to save you fifty cents. lol Good job. The last line you have G-d instead of God.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
Good Monday afternoon Rahcelle. I think if they gave out common sense for free, most people still wouldn't have it. I think she got agitated cause she was sure she was going to save you fifty cents. lol Good job. The last line you have G-d instead of God.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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And she was damn pissy about that, too!!
I think you're very right with your Common Sense theory.
Thanks for the very fun review. xo
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hi Rachelle,
It's called dollar stores blues! Most often it is not a dollar and it can cost even more. It is just a gimmick to get more sales. She told you that sometimes they are two for a dollar making you believe you are getting a bargain. Good job.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
Hi Rachelle,
It's called dollar stores blues! Most often it is not a dollar and it can cost even more. It is just a gimmick to get more sales. She told you that sometimes they are two for a dollar making you believe you are getting a bargain. Good job.
Sylvia
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Sylvia.
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Welcome
Comment from Lobber
Yes, sometimes the people in life we are forced to meet make us into models of tolerance. . . I believe we will be rewarded in the after glow. Hang in there. - Lobber
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
Yes, sometimes the people in life we are forced to meet make us into models of tolerance. . . I believe we will be rewarded in the after glow. Hang in there. - Lobber
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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As a Jewess, it's my birthright to suffer, so it sounds like I am on track!! xo