Does Anyone Care?
A desperate attempt to be saved18 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
This well-written flash fiction story mimics today's society it seems. Satire and irony at its best. I love your artwork choice for this story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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This well-written flash fiction story mimics today's society it seems. Satire and irony at its best. I love your artwork choice for this story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks much for your review and your kind words.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Ahhh, but you were there and cared. You pulled yourself back.
I know it is fiction, but it's what came to mind when I read the story.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Ahhh, but you were there and cared. You pulled yourself back.
I know it is fiction, but it's what came to mind when I read the story.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for the read and the review. Appreciated.
Comment from Heather Knight
Oops! How very sad! One must be pretty desperate to contemplate suicide. Some people say suicides are cowards, I think the opposite. I wouldn't be brave enough.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Oops! How very sad! One must be pretty desperate to contemplate suicide. Some people say suicides are cowards, I think the opposite. I wouldn't be brave enough.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for your read and your thoughts.
Comment from victor 66
An interesting poem and an interesting plea for help. Because no one was there on the bridge with you doesn't mean that no one cares. Perhaps you were just on the bridge at the wrong time. I wish you well.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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An interesting poem and an interesting plea for help. Because no one was there on the bridge with you doesn't mean that no one cares. Perhaps you were just on the bridge at the wrong time. I wish you well.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for the read and your thoughts.
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You're welcome, Harry.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, now that is one of the really sad writes that really gets ya! :( A great offering for the contest, sir -- best of luck! ;)
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reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Wow, now that is one of the really sad writes that really gets ya! :( A great offering for the contest, sir -- best of luck! ;)
the bay, the dying --> the bay; the dying OR the bay - the dying
below the --> below, the
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for the read, review and suggestions. Much appreciated.
Comment from pome lover
a powerful story expressing hope, depression, despair - all in 75 words.
(probably not in that order except for the last one)
I'm glad it is fiction. poor guy.
I wonder what made you think of it.
At any rate, good job and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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a powerful story expressing hope, depression, despair - all in 75 words.
(probably not in that order except for the last one)
I'm glad it is fiction. poor guy.
I wonder what made you think of it.
At any rate, good job and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for the review. Your comments appreciated. Picture of the golden gate brought the thought to mind.
Comment from Gail Denham
Dramatic story for sure - and I trust the end result was not the jump. HOrrible feeling to be so alone and not find anyone care. God cares - perhaps you know that - and He has your best interest in His plans.
Story held my interest- had drama for sure
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reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Dramatic story for sure - and I trust the end result was not the jump. HOrrible feeling to be so alone and not find anyone care. God cares - perhaps you know that - and He has your best interest in His plans.
Story held my interest- had drama for sure
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Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks much for your read and your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from JanPerry
I care. I'm here for you (not). This is the real reason so many of us are so messed up. An uncaring world revolving in an empty universe.
There is so MUCH space out there. Why are we so clumped together? Claustrophobia. I can feel it. Nice poem, well received.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I care. I'm here for you (not). This is the real reason so many of us are so messed up. An uncaring world revolving in an empty universe.
There is so MUCH space out there. Why are we so clumped together? Claustrophobia. I can feel it. Nice poem, well received.
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Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for your read and your comments. Maybe we are clumped together because we need each other. A feeling and a responsibility I believe has left many in this country.
