This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "It's Time For Plan B!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
30 total reviews
Comment from TheStoryMan
What is Winston Churchill going to think of those additions to King George's portrait? Lol! I'd love to be a fly on the wall to hear the lecture Charles will be getting! Poor Mildred and Tommy, their relationship seems doomed.
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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What is Winston Churchill going to think of those additions to King George's portrait? Lol! I'd love to be a fly on the wall to hear the lecture Charles will be getting! Poor Mildred and Tommy, their relationship seems doomed.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Oh, dear Churchill is in for a big shock, lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. Mildred isn't a happy bunny, it's so hard for her. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sandra!
I smiled throughout this chapter for the characterization, plot, and dialogue. Very captivating. And of course, the cliffhanger at the end with Sir Winston was most appealing!
Well-executed, Sandra!
(Poor, Tommy... :( )
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Hello Sandra!
I smiled throughout this chapter for the characterization, plot, and dialogue. Very captivating. And of course, the cliffhanger at the end with Sir Winston was most appealing!
Well-executed, Sandra!
(Poor, Tommy... :( )
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, Diane!! Lots of fun in the next part ... well, for Gladys and Veronica, anyway! lol. Mildred and Tommy, it's not good, is it? Thank you for this lovely review, my friend, I really appreciate it. Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Gail Denham
Well, there you go. You're building this story quite well I think. And I really appreciate that you're using a lot of dialog combined with action. This makes for a great story in my mind.
good job
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Well, there you go. You're building this story quite well I think. And I really appreciate that you're using a lot of dialog combined with action. This makes for a great story in my mind.
good job
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Gail. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part, Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
Very well done Sandra, Poor Mildred is definitely in a proper dilemma in regards to Tom. It would be great if she was allowed to stay in that time period with Tom and have as Veronica put it- the chance to find happiness and love. I liked and enjoyed the plan that Gladys and Veronica have to stir up the admiral's office. And it was a great touch to have him show up with Churchill. A great chapter, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Very well done Sandra, Poor Mildred is definitely in a proper dilemma in regards to Tom. It would be great if she was allowed to stay in that time period with Tom and have as Veronica put it- the chance to find happiness and love. I liked and enjoyed the plan that Gladys and Veronica have to stir up the admiral's office. And it was a great touch to have him show up with Churchill. A great chapter, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Alie, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Mildred and Tommy? Hmm. Churchill is in for a shock! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from WryWriter
Wow, what a way to end this chapter. Hope the next one is coming soon! LOL! Don't know if it just did this when you posted to this site but check the paragraph starting with "The war office was bustling...." The space between paragraphs got omitted. This was a fabulous chapter. I so enjoyed reading it!
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Wow, what a way to end this chapter. Hope the next one is coming soon! LOL! Don't know if it just did this when you posted to this site but check the paragraph starting with "The war office was bustling...." The space between paragraphs got omitted. This was a fabulous chapter. I so enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and for letting me know about the missing space. I've just fixed it. I really appreciate this very encouraging review, my friend, it was lovely to wake up to! Big hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
What an unfortunate thing for Mildred not to find happiness with Tommy, but perhaps the "powers that be" can do something about that, seeing she was brought back to life as a young woman.
The girls put glasses on King George V with curls on the eyebrows,and while they're giggling, who should turn up? but Charles and Winston Churchill, Lord of the Admiralty, wow! Great episode Sandra, good scribing, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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What an unfortunate thing for Mildred not to find happiness with Tommy, but perhaps the "powers that be" can do something about that, seeing she was brought back to life as a young woman.
The girls put glasses on King George V with curls on the eyebrows,and while they're giggling, who should turn up? but Charles and Winston Churchill, Lord of the Admiralty, wow! Great episode Sandra, good scribing, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you so very much, Roy, for this fabulous review! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Winston Churchill is in for a bit of a shock regarding his Vice Admiral, lol! Big hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Serves him right
Comment from JDRBAR
Again, too short. Ghosts are kinda limited in what they can do, aren't they? I'd like to see them put all the furniture on the ceiling or something. That would really rock Charles. LOL
Haven't solved my problem with Char yet. I think it has to do with the template. Maybe I downloaded the wrong one? Did you complete your editing before or after using the template?
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Again, too short. Ghosts are kinda limited in what they can do, aren't they? I'd like to see them put all the furniture on the ceiling or something. That would really rock Charles. LOL
Haven't solved my problem with Char yet. I think it has to do with the template. Maybe I downloaded the wrong one? Did you complete your editing before or after using the template?
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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LOL!! There's me thinking it's toooo long for FS, but my regulars stick with me. Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, dear, I really appreciate them and your lovely review. :)) Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Yes, I edited before I used the template because that can alter where the chapters begin and end. That will then mess things up which means, you have to start all over again. When you have completed it, don't forget to save it twice, once as a normal transcript and the second as a pdf. Send the pdf to KDP, it then will do a draft publish for you to check over again for any other errors before you click the final 'publish'. Any questions, send them to me on messenger, I'll pick them up and reply. :)) xxxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Winston Churchill....Oh I remember the News Reels about our allies and He stood out from the rest. A true friend of America during the war. Mildred and Tommy are falling in love. What a pity. Now what are you going to do with that? I can't wait to see what Mr. Churchill will think of the picture. That was some devilish mischief, and it will make Charles look loony tunes for sure. Well done, Sandra. Nancy
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Winston Churchill....Oh I remember the News Reels about our allies and He stood out from the rest. A true friend of America during the war. Mildred and Tommy are falling in love. What a pity. Now what are you going to do with that? I can't wait to see what Mr. Churchill will think of the picture. That was some devilish mischief, and it will make Charles look loony tunes for sure. Well done, Sandra. Nancy
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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It's going to get funnier when they go into the office. lol. Thank you so much, Nancy, for this lovely review. Poor Mildred, it's not fair, is it! lol!! Big hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Sandra this has quite the ending. So they are seeing Winston Churchill, no less. Poor Mildred, who can't have the life with Tommy as she really wants to. She's visible but she doesn't belong to the time she's been placed in. I feel so sorry for her. Brilliant as ever. You know, I love the story. A big hug. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Wow, Sandra this has quite the ending. So they are seeing Winston Churchill, no less. Poor Mildred, who can't have the life with Tommy as she really wants to. She's visible but she doesn't belong to the time she's been placed in. I feel so sorry for her. Brilliant as ever. You know, I love the story. A big hug. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you so very much, Ulla, for all those lovely stars. I really appreciate your constant support, my friend. Lot's of fun in store for Charles! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Tpa
I enjoyed every single aspect of the item. The Author has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I enjoyed every single aspect of the item. The Author has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review, my friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this part. :)) Sandra xx