This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Mildred Talks To Amelia"Third book in the time travel trilogy
30 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Interesting dialogue. Good cliffhanger to leave the story resting on until the next posting arrives. Well crafted and enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Interesting dialogue. Good cliffhanger to leave the story resting on until the next posting arrives. Well crafted and enjoyable read.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for reading this part, Bret. It's nice to know you enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from JDRBAR
out the fresh cups of fresh tea
I would eliminate the first "fresh."
Your writing is so realistic. It always puts me into the room or scene as if I was part of it.
I'm still having trouble with reformatting my download from fanstory. My brother is a computer genius and he couldn't get it to work either. If it isn't one thing it's another. Maybe I'm just not meant to get published.
I'm half way through reading your first book and loving it.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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out the fresh cups of fresh tea
I would eliminate the first "fresh."
Your writing is so realistic. It always puts me into the room or scene as if I was part of it.
I'm still having trouble with reformatting my download from fanstory. My brother is a computer genius and he couldn't get it to work either. If it isn't one thing it's another. Maybe I'm just not meant to get published.
I'm half way through reading your first book and loving it.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the six lovely stars, Diane, and the really lovely review.
Did you get my email? Let me know, because the KDP template is the way to go. I'll PM my Skype address, and if you want, we can go through it face to face. That way I can talk you through it. Thanks again for the lovely review, it means so much coming from an author with your talent. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. The dialogue is interesting and carries the story. The comment about believing in ghosts makes me wonder if Amelia has 'seen' a ghost already. I know, just thinking out loud. It seems their plans didn't get off to a great start. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. The dialogue is interesting and carries the story. The comment about believing in ghosts makes me wonder if Amelia has 'seen' a ghost already. I know, just thinking out loud. It seems their plans didn't get off to a great start. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Jan, for another lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. I'm posting the next part on Wednesday, so you'll find out what happens with Amelia. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, (I'm Yelling )...are you kidding...I waited all that time...and she didn't get the words out...just tell the old girl...Mildred should have kept talking...I'll be a ghost by the time they get this guy...all right...let her change her top...and no more tea...give her a piece of candy...she may drool...but she won't have to leave the room...well written chapter you...now talk with Mildred...you seem to know her better than most...LOL...love your story told my wonderful sweet friend...love you sooooo many...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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HI Sandra, (I'm Yelling )...are you kidding...I waited all that time...and she didn't get the words out...just tell the old girl...Mildred should have kept talking...I'll be a ghost by the time they get this guy...all right...let her change her top...and no more tea...give her a piece of candy...she may drool...but she won't have to leave the room...well written chapter you...now talk with Mildred...you seem to know her better than most...LOL...love your story told my wonderful sweet friend...love you sooooo many...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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LOL! I need to take my pills before I read your reviews, they kill me with laughter! Come back on Wednesday, you'll find out what happens then. I did have a little chat with Mildred, and she said...
"Oh Lordy, Miss Linda, how were I t' know she'd start dribblin' and mess up that posh blouse of hers? It fair took me breath away! I'll be havin' another chat with her in a mo', don't be frettin' yerself."
I hope she put your mind at rest! LOL. Love you too, my dear friend. Biggest hugs. Sandra xxxxx
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my mind went to rest a long time ago...OK!!! I'll be a waitin...say Hi to Ian for me...and hope things a working out...smiling big...xxoo love you
Comment from royowen
I don't think Mildred has put her foot in it, but somehow I don't think so, I think Amelia will step up to the plate concerning the revelstion that Gladys being a ghost may be a possibility. But you've made a great fist of this being a possibility, well done dear Sandra, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I don't think Mildred has put her foot in it, but somehow I don't think so, I think Amelia will step up to the plate concerning the revelstion that Gladys being a ghost may be a possibility. But you've made a great fist of this being a possibility, well done dear Sandra, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, my dear friend, for another of your lovely reviews. I always appreciate what you have to say about my story. Big hugs! :) Sandra xx
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Bless you Sandra,
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love this ghost story and you have done such a good job with it. It has a lot of tension that you make me feel with the words. I didn't see a thing to make a recommendation on. Have a good evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I love this ghost story and you have done such a good job with it. It has a lot of tension that you make me feel with the words. I didn't see a thing to make a recommendation on. Have a good evening. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review and golden 6 stars, Shirley, that is so kind of you. I'm delighted you are still enjoying my story. I'll be posting again on Wednesday so everyone will discover how the conversation will go when Amelia comes back. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
I don't think Amelia is surprised at the thought of ghosts, but that she has thought of Glady's ghost, and maybe has felt her presence.
Poor Mildred. I hope all goes well with her explanation and Amelia will do all she can to help out the girls.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I don't think Amelia is surprised at the thought of ghosts, but that she has thought of Glady's ghost, and maybe has felt her presence.
Poor Mildred. I hope all goes well with her explanation and Amelia will do all she can to help out the girls.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, my friend, and for the wonderful review. You'll find out more on Wednesday, so stay tuned!! lol. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from WryWriter
Oh my! This cliffhanger is sooo good! How will the old woman react? Is it possible she has seen ghosts? Can't wait to find out. This chapter is done excellently. I have only one question: [I looked at Gladys and saw the sadness in her face. "So many wasted minutes that I could have spent with her. Now it's too late."] I got a bit confused as to who was making this statement. I assumed it was Gladys because of content.
Enjoyed reading this chapter!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Oh my! This cliffhanger is sooo good! How will the old woman react? Is it possible she has seen ghosts? Can't wait to find out. This chapter is done excellently. I have only one question: [I looked at Gladys and saw the sadness in her face. "So many wasted minutes that I could have spent with her. Now it's too late."] I got a bit confused as to who was making this statement. I assumed it was Gladys because of content.
Enjoyed reading this chapter!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for this excellent review, my friend. I had another look at that sentence and agreed with what you said. So I've changed it now:
Gladys's shoulders drooped, and when she spoke there was such sadness in her voice. "So many....
Thank you for that. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
Oh my goodness, Sandra. Mildred most certainly came out with it, didn't she? There were no 'ands, if nor buts', just her question-'Do you believe in ghosts?'. I think Amelia handled the question rather well-sputtering her tea, then being concerned about staining and the need to change. Considering the time frame, she needed time to compose herself before even thinking of an answer. They had had a great chat thus far and Amelia was now aware that Tom had thought ill of the admiral. A great chapter, enjoyable to read and amazing descriptive details. Hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Oh my goodness, Sandra. Mildred most certainly came out with it, didn't she? There were no 'ands, if nor buts', just her question-'Do you believe in ghosts?'. I think Amelia handled the question rather well-sputtering her tea, then being concerned about staining and the need to change. Considering the time frame, she needed time to compose herself before even thinking of an answer. They had had a great chat thus far and Amelia was now aware that Tom had thought ill of the admiral. A great chapter, enjoyable to read and amazing descriptive details. Hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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What a lovely review, Alie, thank you so very much. The chat will continue and be out on Wednesday, so you'll soon find out what happens. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are so welcome Sandra, mmm then I will catch it Thurs, can't wait.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, this is wonderful and now you leave us on a cliff hanger. Please do hurry up. Mildred is great and to the point. Actually, I think we're in for a surprise. A surprise that is very much needed. As usual, Sandra, you keep me highly entertained. I love the story. Big hugs from an unusual warm Spain. Well, at least where I am. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra, this is wonderful and now you leave us on a cliff hanger. Please do hurry up. Mildred is great and to the point. Actually, I think we're in for a surprise. A surprise that is very much needed. As usual, Sandra, you keep me highly entertained. I love the story. Big hugs from an unusual warm Spain. Well, at least where I am. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Ulla, thank you so much for the lovely six stars and wonderful review. Yes, a surprise is coming, but for whom? Find out on Wednesday. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra x