This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "The Beginnings Of A Plan"Third book in the time travel trilogy
29 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Okay now the plan can be put into action. I'm sure Gladys will be all for it. Looking forward to seeing what they do to scare the old man into confessing. This should be fun. As always, well done. Rox
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Okay now the plan can be put into action. I'm sure Gladys will be all for it. Looking forward to seeing what they do to scare the old man into confessing. This should be fun. As always, well done. Rox
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Veronica will have fun with this, and I'll have fun writing it, lol. Thank you so much for the lovely review, Rox. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra, and one that makes me look forward to the haunting of Gladys' horrible husband. Mildred and Tommy seem to be getting closer and closer... I've heard of long distance relationships, but not one that spans the years like this. Lol, what do I know? You can do what you like with time travel!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Another great chapter, Sandra, and one that makes me look forward to the haunting of Gladys' horrible husband. Mildred and Tommy seem to be getting closer and closer... I've heard of long distance relationships, but not one that spans the years like this. Lol, what do I know? You can do what you like with time travel!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Alexis, for your lovely review and all those fabulous stars! I have inside information about what you can do with time travel. ;) Being one of the 'powers' I can do whatever I want!! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Treischel
Now, for me it would be coffee rather than tea, but morning toast sounds great. In fact I'll run and make some myself.
Clever haunting ideas. Get the Admiral at home, and then at work. Hard to write that off.
Again you display an easy going humor and dialog. They sure have fun planning.
I smiled at Mildred's pain anticipation. Another clever piece with the hair adjustment.
A quick transition for the reader too, into the past. A convincing post bombing scene. Glad she found Gladys. A very good chapter, that promises to begin a delightfully haunting sequence. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Now, for me it would be coffee rather than tea, but morning toast sounds great. In fact I'll run and make some myself.
Clever haunting ideas. Get the Admiral at home, and then at work. Hard to write that off.
Again you display an easy going humor and dialog. They sure have fun planning.
I smiled at Mildred's pain anticipation. Another clever piece with the hair adjustment.
A quick transition for the reader too, into the past. A convincing post bombing scene. Glad she found Gladys. A very good chapter, that promises to begin a delightfully haunting sequence. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I'll enjoy writing the haunting chapters, I like to frighten horrible people. I just wish I could be like Veronica, lol. Thank you so much, Tom, for your lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
She should be all for it! Who wouldn't want the worst for the person who had made their life miserable and then had murdered them. I'm sure she would like to join in the fun.
Vice Admiral Charles Pembrock is going to be the victim this time. He is going down! (I love hauntings) LOL Good job Sandra. Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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She should be all for it! Who wouldn't want the worst for the person who had made their life miserable and then had murdered them. I'm sure she would like to join in the fun.
Vice Admiral Charles Pembrock is going to be the victim this time. He is going down! (I love hauntings) LOL Good job Sandra. Nancy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I think Gladys would love it. I know I'll enjoy writing it, lol. Thank you so much for the lovely review, Nancy, I'll be posting early this week. I want to get this book finished now. I'll miss them all though. Big hugs, my friend, Sandra xxx
Comment from WryWriter
So the fun begins! (If you have to add any to this chapter, add some of the crazy ideas Veronica and Mildred came up with but were too kookie to use. Give the reader some laughs!) Love the way this story is going. So much fun to read!
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"How does your head feel today." (?)
Now (that) we had a viable plan, I couldn't wait to get started.
Gladys was there sat (seated) (OR) (and sat) opposite her husband in the sitting room.
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Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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So the fun begins! (If you have to add any to this chapter, add some of the crazy ideas Veronica and Mildred came up with but were too kookie to use. Give the reader some laughs!) Love the way this story is going. So much fun to read!
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"How does your head feel today." (?)
Now (that) we had a viable plan, I couldn't wait to get started.
Gladys was there sat (seated) (OR) (and sat) opposite her husband in the sitting room.
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Enjoyed!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for another really helpful review, my friend. I've made the corrections. I'm delighted you are enjoying the chapters, now Veronica is going to have some real fun. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great ending line, Sandra. You did a great job with this chapter. I enjoyed reading it. The transition from WW1 to the present then back again was very smooth. I like the discussion of how they plan to 'get' the vice admiral, You included some great details so readers can visualize the scenes such as the patients emerging from the smoke-filled corridor into the fresh air. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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What a great ending line, Sandra. You did a great job with this chapter. I enjoyed reading it. The transition from WW1 to the present then back again was very smooth. I like the discussion of how they plan to 'get' the vice admiral, You included some great details so readers can visualize the scenes such as the patients emerging from the smoke-filled corridor into the fresh air. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, Jan, and this fabulous review. You have made my day! The fun will begin now, Veronica is eager to start her ghostly bit now. lol. Big hugs, dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from kiwijenny
"I've been using me noddle,..... noodle?
I'm glad Mildred's modern sutures wouldn't be noticed back in World War One era..
The quick shift back took me by surprise
Another good chapter
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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"I've been using me noddle,..... noodle?
I'm glad Mildred's modern sutures wouldn't be noticed back in World War One era..
The quick shift back took me by surprise
Another good chapter
God bless
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Jenny, thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Mildred never gets those words right, to her, her brain is a noddle, to everyone else's noodle! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from RGstar
Well Sandra, I never feel I am giving this what it deserves as I lack the experience of the book by missing so much. A nice holding chapter that I know must link well with that which has gone before, so I wish you luck with the success of this , fully deserved.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Well Sandra, I never feel I am giving this what it deserves as I lack the experience of the book by missing so much. A nice holding chapter that I know must link well with that which has gone before, so I wish you luck with the success of this , fully deserved.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi, RG, we don't see you on here enough! I hope you are well? Thank you so much for reading this part, that was so kind of you. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello sandramitchell
I read your new chapter in your book
The Beginnings Of A Plan
I noticed that you asked in your authors note---
(with Mildred's added dialect) any errors spotted, I would be grateful if you could point them out to me.
not knowing anything about how the
UK English speak I have no idea what is correct or not, all I know sandramitchell, that especially, when Mildred said this,
"Oh, Lordy, Doctor James.I's got t' be tellin' you,pain'n me aren't the bestest of chums. In fact, we's mortal enemies!
Made me smile
Gert
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hello sandramitchell
I read your new chapter in your book
The Beginnings Of A Plan
I noticed that you asked in your authors note---
(with Mildred's added dialect) any errors spotted, I would be grateful if you could point them out to me.
not knowing anything about how the
UK English speak I have no idea what is correct or not, all I know sandramitchell, that especially, when Mildred said this,
"Oh, Lordy, Doctor James.I's got t' be tellin' you,pain'n me aren't the bestest of chums. In fact, we's mortal enemies!
Made me smile
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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LOL, you made me smile too, Gert. I'm so pleased you do understand our Mildred and her quirky expressions do make you smile. She is my favourite character. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend, and I'm so pleased to see you! :)) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome Sandra.
Gert
Comment from aryr
A great chapter Sandra. I was so glad that Mildred and Veronica finally figured out how to dive the Admiral to his downfall. It was great that James was able to help with Mildred's hair. Tommy was so sweet to think of Mildred. And it was great that Veronica found Gladys at her home and the nodding Admiral. Things will definitely get interesting now. Great job. Smiles and Hugs. .........
Just a couple of fluff areas that you need to put the appropriate spaces in-'sip ofthescolding liquid', and 'Michaelchargedin to'.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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A great chapter Sandra. I was so glad that Mildred and Veronica finally figured out how to dive the Admiral to his downfall. It was great that James was able to help with Mildred's hair. Tommy was so sweet to think of Mildred. And it was great that Veronica found Gladys at her home and the nodding Admiral. Things will definitely get interesting now. Great job. Smiles and Hugs. .........
Just a couple of fluff areas that you need to put the appropriate spaces in-'sip ofthescolding liquid', and 'Michaelchargedin to'.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for reading this part, Alie. I've put those gremlins right. I don't know how that happened. I'm pleased you enjoyed this part, even though the gremlins messed it up. :( Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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LOL those darn gremlins, you are most welcome Sandra, I guess I read gremlin rather well.