Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Your writing is perfect pith!

"Here we are," Bill called out, walking quickly over to the door. After studying the labels on various keys, he eventually found the right one, and after inserting it in the lock, he opened the door. "You found the light switch, then," he said, sounding surprised when he saw the light was on. He then stepped back to allow Mildred to walk through first. "So, how are you planning to get all the patients down here?"

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for another lovely review, Diane, I really appreciate your support. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Sandra. I see you are still maintaining good humor within this story: I was tickled by this: " Just a thought. If you put your head in me stomach, would you be able t' see what I had for breakfast?"
LOL

I like the way your story is progressing, my friend. It will be interesting to see how you will handle the newly wounded patients, indeed. I will be waiting, my friend. Bless you, Bob

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thank you so much, Bob, how nice of you to say that. I do have a warped sense of humour, hence Mildred's question! lol. Big hugs, my friend, :)) Sandra x

Comment from Tootsie55

Excellent

This is still great reading thanks again. I made a statement up ahead but it is all ok now. through my foot, (or leg or are you not solid just a ghost image?) Ok never mind next paragraph solved my query

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thank you so much, Louise, for reading this part. I take it you found out that Veronica can't be seen to anyone apart from Mildred. She's not a ghost, just a time-traveller. Mildred is too, but she has been sent back a a solid person and is visible to everyone. I'm glad you enjoyed it. lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by Tootsie55 on 19-Jan-2019

Yeah I figured that about Veronica, eventually, hehe.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Well I am very glad Veronica is back with Mildred and they have come up with a way to save the patients in the hospital. Well done as always, I saw no error and am looking forward to the next chapter. =}

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Hi Rox! Thank you for another lovely review, my friend, I'm really pleased you are still enjoying my story! Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from SLMorrical

Exceptional

It is very good and flows from the last chapter very well. I can understand the frustration that Veronica is expressing. Looking for the key help them to obtain another person to assist in evacuating the patients. I have a question on your writing. Talking about the bombs and such, the statement reads"--We don't knows when they'll be comin' t' bomb us again. I have a problem with knows it doesn't sound right to me. I am sure it is grammatically correct. I also haven't seen comin' t' used before. I am not an avid writer like you so, I wouldn't know about things like that. I like the cliff hanger ending for the chapter. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Hi Sandy, thank you so much for the lovely six stars, and fabulous review. Mildred speaks with a regional dialect used in her part of the country on the very south west of England. Many counties in England have their own unique dialect which sometimes is hard to understand even by the English people from other parts. Mildred literally sounds the 't' but not the oo in to; 'knows', is quite common, but not good grammar, the same as when she drops the 'g' at the end of gerund words, ie: walking, becomes, walkin'. When she says things like, 'that's my hat,' she would say, 'that's me hat.' You'll get used to her the more you read. She has a heart of gold and very popular with the readers. I hope that helps you. Thanks again, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xx

reply by SLMorrical on 19-Jan-2019

Yes it does. Thank you.

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

Your words flow so smoothly, and the pace of your story makes it so immensely entertaining for the reader. I especially enjoyed your vivid description of the rats and they were big to saddle. I wish you continued success in your writing.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thank you so very much for this really lovely review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

I always rush on over to read when I see you have a new chapter out. This is such a fun and fabulous story. I don't know how you think these days things up, but you're doing a fine job. Keep writing to us.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for another lovely review, Joy. You always are so encouraging. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A definite advantage being able to go through a wall.

Hah! I laughed at the rat running through her foot.

Lots of humor in a bad situation.

What a stroke of luck that Bill came around. Not to mention quick thinking on Mildred's part.

Wondereful chapter.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Aw, thank you, Tom, for your lovely review. With Mildred around, it can't be serious all the time, she's not capable of being that way. That's what I love about her character, I can do loads with her. Thanks, my friend, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :))Sandra xx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Wow, you did fantastic with this chapter Sandra. It was great that Bill had knowledge of the key and then that Mildred thought about asking Tommy to help. It was really interesting that everyone thought it was a great idea. The only drawback was the surgical post op patients and how they would be moved and cared for. I know that is the next chapter or the one after that, but Mildred and Veronica will figure it out. All will be saved if those two having anything to say or do about it. Very well done my friend, great job, hugs and smiles.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you so much, Alie for another of your lovely reviews, Alie. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Mildred has loads to do, and Veronica will have some checking out to do. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by aryr on 19-Jan-2019

You are so welcome Sandra, it all sounds so exciting and I will patiently await. Smiles and hugs.

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Interesting impressive descriptive sentence structures and paragraphs.
Very detailed information about the subject matter writing.
God's Bless, and Good Luck on the books.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and thanks for the good luck wishes for my books. :)) Big hugs. Sandra xx