This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "James' Discovery!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
28 total reviews
Comment from apky
Hello Sandra,
Thank you so much for having entertained me with this incredible story of yours, offering excellent writing to the joy of my reading. It is the kind of story I could keep on reading for many months, because you keep injecting new angles, useful, relevant angles, to, each time around.
Wish you all the very best for the festive season!
Warmest,
Aki
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Hello Sandra,
Thank you so much for having entertained me with this incredible story of yours, offering excellent writing to the joy of my reading. It is the kind of story I could keep on reading for many months, because you keep injecting new angles, useful, relevant angles, to, each time around.
Wish you all the very best for the festive season!
Warmest,
Aki
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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What a lovely review, Aki, thank you so very much! I wish you a fabulous Christmas and a wonderful 2019, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh my. Poor Mildred, she is going to have to kill someone. Not a fun job, although a man who murders his wife deserves it I suppose. Another great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Mildred accomplishes her task.
Want to let you know I sent you an e-card. If you see something from superpinkypig that's me. I wanted to send handmade ones, but ran out of time. I hope you will like the card I emailed. Merry Christmas. Rox
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Oh my. Poor Mildred, she is going to have to kill someone. Not a fun job, although a man who murders his wife deserves it I suppose. Another great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Mildred accomplishes her task.
Want to let you know I sent you an e-card. If you see something from superpinkypig that's me. I wanted to send handmade ones, but ran out of time. I hope you will like the card I emailed. Merry Christmas. Rox
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Hi Rox, thank you so much for reading this part, and for your lovely concern for Mildred. Can you picture the scene when Veronica tells her! lol.
I've just seen your e-card, it's lovely. You and me both on the time-line. I suddenly woke up to the fact it's Christmas a week today! Now it really is a rush!! Thank you for the lovely thought in sending me that card. it's truly lovely. Merry Christmas my friend and have a really successful 2019!! Big hugs. Sandra xxxx
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I'm enjoying the book very much. I;m glad you liked the card. Christmas always comes too soon! =} Rox
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Dear Sandra, still firing on all cylinders I see. I know, of course, that you must never sleep - just keep churning out the great work. I'm on the home run I think, but the operation on the 12th slowed me down a bit and as there is no deadline, and Christmas round the corner, I am taking it easy. Got rid of those headers and steadily progressing. After talking to you about Eric and his book - I thought of Harry Potter. Imagine if you ended up competing with that - and why not. Wouldn't it be great. No doubt I shall be back in touch with all my niggles and questions but in the meantime have a Merry Christmas, and of course all the Best for the coming year 2019 - what will it hold for us I wonder? Thanks for all the help you have given me, you sweet girl, but you are not off the book yet LOL. I'll be back yelling for help no doubt. Love Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Dear Sandra, still firing on all cylinders I see. I know, of course, that you must never sleep - just keep churning out the great work. I'm on the home run I think, but the operation on the 12th slowed me down a bit and as there is no deadline, and Christmas round the corner, I am taking it easy. Got rid of those headers and steadily progressing. After talking to you about Eric and his book - I thought of Harry Potter. Imagine if you ended up competing with that - and why not. Wouldn't it be great. No doubt I shall be back in touch with all my niggles and questions but in the meantime have a Merry Christmas, and of course all the Best for the coming year 2019 - what will it hold for us I wonder? Thanks for all the help you have given me, you sweet girl, but you are not off the book yet LOL. I'll be back yelling for help no doubt. Love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Aww, Dorothy, you are always so welcome. Come back any time. I'll pm you my email address, and then I will get your messages even faster. It would be lovely if something did happen with Eric's book. It's out on Amazon.com now, but not on .co.uk yet, which is so frustrating. I wanted to give it to Eric at Christmas, but it won't get to me until 27th -- 28th Dec. So, after all my panic to get it done in time, Amazon have let me down. Never mind, I know he'll love it when I can give it to him.
Your book will be out there in the New Year, and I'm sure it will be lovely. I'm glad you've found out how to get rid of the headers.
I'm also pleased your operation is out the way, now do exactly what you said you would do, and rest up. You will be fresher to decipher my instructions later! lol.
Have a wonderful Christmas, and a brilliant 2019. And a big (gentle) hug for the 6 stars!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
Ah! So Vice-Admiral may have possibly committed an act of treason to help the Germans win the First World War...perhaps. I wonder if Mildred has to kill Pembroke, but then, she's a gentle soul, how could she kill anyone? An excellent episode Sandra, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Ah! So Vice-Admiral may have possibly committed an act of treason to help the Germans win the First World War...perhaps. I wonder if Mildred has to kill Pembroke, but then, she's a gentle soul, how could she kill anyone? An excellent episode Sandra, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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LOL, everyone is quite stirred up at the thought of Mildred doing the deed. We'll see how things progress in the future parts. Thank you so much, my friend, for your lovely thoughts on this part. Big hugs, :)) Sandra xx
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well done
Comment from rwilliam
WoOoOo...this is such an exciting chapter! I had so much fun reading this. I was on the edge of my seat.
I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE. It is so real to me. I can see this world that you're inventing.
I didn't see any fixes. VERY well written, my friend! Bravo.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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WoOoOo...this is such an exciting chapter! I had so much fun reading this. I was on the edge of my seat.
I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE. It is so real to me. I can see this world that you're inventing.
I didn't see any fixes. VERY well written, my friend! Bravo.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much, Rebecca!!! I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!! LOL! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, everyone is questioning if Mildred could even kill a fly!, lol. Thank you for the wonderful golden stars, my friend!! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Lady Jane
whoa, I didn't see that ending coming, Sandra. What a well paced chapter. The information given lends to the overall pacing of the story, the dialogue was superb, and the notion that Mildred actually has a destined purpose and isn't just in limbo, that's an excellent twist...now, how will this play out? Is she successful? Does history change? Or does Veronica find some way to help her, and what is Veronica's part in all this, hehe?
To be able to keep all the iron's in the fire, methodically lined up, Sandra and make sense of it all with each subsequent chapter, that takes skill and forethought. Excellent writing, dear. Until next installment...
janelle
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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whoa, I didn't see that ending coming, Sandra. What a well paced chapter. The information given lends to the overall pacing of the story, the dialogue was superb, and the notion that Mildred actually has a destined purpose and isn't just in limbo, that's an excellent twist...now, how will this play out? Is she successful? Does history change? Or does Veronica find some way to help her, and what is Veronica's part in all this, hehe?
To be able to keep all the iron's in the fire, methodically lined up, Sandra and make sense of it all with each subsequent chapter, that takes skill and forethought. Excellent writing, dear. Until next installment...
janelle
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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What a lovely review, Janelle, thank you so very much! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Lots of fun coming up. :)) Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from aryr
Definitely a surprise ending. You provided so many great details throughout the chapter Sandra. Thankfully James read the last letter aloud and Veronica was listening when she clued into hearing the Vice Admiral's name. I suspect that is who Mildred has to kill. Definitely a surprise ending. Big hugs and smiles. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Definitely a surprise ending. You provided so many great details throughout the chapter Sandra. Thankfully James read the last letter aloud and Veronica was listening when she clued into hearing the Vice Admiral's name. I suspect that is who Mildred has to kill. Definitely a surprise ending. Big hugs and smiles. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much, Alie, for this lovely review. I hope she's up for it! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are most welcome Sandra.
Comment from alexisleech
It's hard to imagine Mildred killing anyone because she's such a sweet person, but maybe circumstances will change her. If I knew it was between me being put into an old people's 'commune,' or living an independent existence in my own home, I'm sure I might consider someone's murder instead! - especially if they were a weasel like Gladys' husband.
Go get him, Mildred!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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It's hard to imagine Mildred killing anyone because she's such a sweet person, but maybe circumstances will change her. If I knew it was between me being put into an old people's 'commune,' or living an independent existence in my own home, I'm sure I might consider someone's murder instead! - especially if they were a weasel like Gladys' husband.
Go get him, Mildred!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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LOL, it's going to be a fun part, and who knows? She might just do it. Hmm. Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my friend, and the lovely review. Big hugs, :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Chrissy710
Oh Sandra, Will Mildred kill the vice Admiral? cant wait for the next chapter. You have such a creative mind And write so easily Love it Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Oh Sandra, Will Mildred kill the vice Admiral? cant wait for the next chapter. You have such a creative mind And write so easily Love it Cheers Christine
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review and the beautiful shiny stars, Christine!! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Poor Mildred, she hasn't a clue, lol. Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from damommy
I have to believe that Mildred will get back to her own time, but I'm very worried about her. At least, we know a little more about this odd predicament. Obviously James' grandfather made it back. lol. Another great chapter. Keep 'em coming.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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I have to believe that Mildred will get back to her own time, but I'm very worried about her. At least, we know a little more about this odd predicament. Obviously James' grandfather made it back. lol. Another great chapter. Keep 'em coming.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Bless your heart, my dear Yvonne, thank you so much for the 6 stars and the wonderful review. Yes, James' grandfather did make it back, and Veronica has to keep it that way before he the Vice Admiral has a chance to change things. Such a complicated life our Veronica and Mildred lead! lol!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx