The Rose of Help
A rose helps a young man get a girlfriend28 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Whatever might bring two people together, love is always to be celebrated. And the rose, especially the red rose has always been a symbol of love. It's lovely to imagine two young people meeting and celebrating this special relationship. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Whatever might bring two people together, love is always to be celebrated. And the rose, especially the red rose has always been a symbol of love. It's lovely to imagine two young people meeting and celebrating this special relationship. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!😊
Comment from KatyM
Interesting. I have never read any FlashFiction. Can't help but wonder if they stay together and get married or if they are only together for a time. :)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Interesting. I have never read any FlashFiction. Can't help but wonder if they stay together and get married or if they are only together for a time. :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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They both got married and with children happily ever after. Thank you! :)
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your lovely dribble flash fiction. It is a very uplifting story with a nice happy ending. Well done. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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I really enjoyed reading your lovely dribble flash fiction. It is a very uplifting story with a nice happy ending. Well done. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you! You have made my day! :)
Comment from Ulla
Hi Raul, the rose is indeed the symbol of love, and especially the dark red one. And it did its magic in this little tale. It won the heart of the girl. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Hi Raul, the rose is indeed the symbol of love, and especially the dark red one. And it did its magic in this little tale. It won the heart of the girl. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a sweet, romantic little story, perfect for the Dribble contest. The rose is one of the most beautiful flowers there is, and to give a single rose to a lady, is so romantic. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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What a sweet, romantic little story, perfect for the Dribble contest. The rose is one of the most beautiful flowers there is, and to give a single rose to a lady, is so romantic. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from tfawcus
The rose is often considered to be a symbol of love, and so it is no surprise that you have used it as such in your Flash Fiction story. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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The rose is often considered to be a symbol of love, and so it is no surprise that you have used it as such in your Flash Fiction story. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked the idea of this very much, how the object defines and brings things to those around them. Just squeaking in on the word count with a 52 count.
best of luck to you
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Hi there,
I liked the idea of this very much, how the object defines and brings things to those around them. Just squeaking in on the word count with a 52 count.
best of luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from meeshu
this is very fine language and an unusual spin. making the rose the star of the show takes humility. an admirable trait, indeed. excellent, Raul.............meeshu
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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this is very fine language and an unusual spin. making the rose the star of the show takes humility. an admirable trait, indeed. excellent, Raul.............meeshu
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from heart of Lou
This is a cute little story about a guy who wanted a girlfriend and got one because of the rose, although I'm afraid I didn't really get the connection, or what the rose had to do with him getting a girlfriend. I love the rose in the picture, my favorite flower.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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This is a cute little story about a guy who wanted a girlfriend and got one because of the rose, although I'm afraid I didn't really get the connection, or what the rose had to do with him getting a girlfriend. I love the rose in the picture, my favorite flower.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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The rose gave Todd a girlfriend. Thank you for the review! 😊
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your dribble fiction story, Raul. A rose can and does symbolize many things--esp love. I enjoyed reading your little story. The picture is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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You did a good job with your dribble fiction story, Raul. A rose can and does symbolize many things--esp love. I enjoyed reading your little story. The picture is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you!😊
