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Acrostic-Loop poem41 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
You have certainly penned a creative and thoughtful acrostic/loop poem. It also amazes me the words and thoughts of writers through the ages. I'd like to think that my thoughts are original, and yet, I know that somewhere, someone must have possessed similar thoughts...
Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hello!
You have certainly penned a creative and thoughtful acrostic/loop poem. It also amazes me the words and thoughts of writers through the ages. I'd like to think that my thoughts are original, and yet, I know that somewhere, someone must have possessed similar thoughts...
Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Kahpot, you have made good use of the contest 'I can't'. I enjoyed this take and your idea of time traveling words. Clever and your ending was great. Really wrapped the poem up nicely. I have no suggestions for improvement and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hello Kahpot, you have made good use of the contest 'I can't'. I enjoyed this take and your idea of time traveling words. Clever and your ending was great. Really wrapped the poem up nicely. I have no suggestions for improvement and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Kim Sealock
Very well written. I usually find acrostic poems a little choppy, but your's reads very fluidly. There is a bit of internal rhyme that happens and lends itself well to the rhythm of the poem.
Good Job and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Very well written. I usually find acrostic poems a little choppy, but your's reads very fluidly. There is a bit of internal rhyme that happens and lends itself well to the rhythm of the poem.
Good Job and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Again thank you very much I am so glad you like this work****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, my friend. Well, you can, because you did - a fabulous job on this Acrostic loop poem. Well done, good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hello there, my friend. Well, you can, because you did - a fabulous job on this Acrostic loop poem. Well done, good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, " well you can- because you did" there's a 6-word poem in there somewhere, many thanks my Friend****kahpot
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My pleasure. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is very good and very well said. There are words that have been penned forever ago and are still speaking as you so eloquently stated.. We all have been given certain gifts to fulfill our purpose in this life. I've had the pleasure of reading many writer's offerings on this website and am honored that I have had the pleasure to read such well written work. I've read many of your works and have not been disappointed. You have good writing skill! Well done Kahpot!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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This is very good and very well said. There are words that have been penned forever ago and are still speaking as you so eloquently stated.. We all have been given certain gifts to fulfill our purpose in this life. I've had the pleasure of reading many writer's offerings on this website and am honored that I have had the pleasure to read such well written work. I've read many of your works and have not been disappointed. You have good writing skill! Well done Kahpot!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, this is a very encouraging review, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from donette1914
very creative and i like the artwork and i feel you could win this contest entry.
it was a honor to read your work
thank you for sharing this well penned work donette1914 july 15 2018
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very creative and i like the artwork and i feel you could win this contest entry.
it was a honor to read your work
thank you for sharing this well penned work donette1914 july 15 2018
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic loop poem about our abilities to do things we think we cannot do because we all have different ideas and different ways our lives become a ace to do everything.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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A very well-written acrostic loop poem about our abilities to do things we think we cannot do because we all have different ideas and different ways our lives become a ace to do everything.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
This is such a well structured poem. Very very clever. I love the artwork and the profound message I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
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This is such a well structured poem. Very very clever. I love the artwork and the profound message I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, a well written Acrostic poem that is also a loop poem - two for the price of one. Very clever, and it reads well, makes sense and I like your final line which, incidentally you portray yourself in a very modest manner, which ends with the title of your acrostic - 'I can't'. Very well thought out - Good Luck in the contest - warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Kahpot, a well written Acrostic poem that is also a loop poem - two for the price of one. Very clever, and it reads well, makes sense and I like your final line which, incidentally you portray yourself in a very modest manner, which ends with the title of your acrostic - 'I can't'. Very well thought out - Good Luck in the contest - warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent and encouragingreview****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your acrostic, kahpot. For a loop poem, too, it works/reads well. You give readers much to think about in terms of their words & what happens to them. You have spoken so much in a short space. Good job & thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
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I enjoyed reading your acrostic, kahpot. For a loop poem, too, it works/reads well. You give readers much to think about in terms of their words & what happens to them. You have spoken so much in a short space. Good job & thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot