Comment from jppoet

Excellent

Your great poem attracted me by its TELEPHEME word as I love INVENTING WORDS, deliberating a book of same, as it is now replete. Useful for FS poems when one writes himself into a corner for which there is no real rhyme. I checked your word in a book I have called
THE SUPERIOR PERSON'S BOOK OF WORDS, published by Bloombury, did not find it there.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

It's not in any dictionary either, in so far as I could see, and yet here it is in this little volume. That's probably true of about 25% of them, at a rough guess. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a silly limerick about how people, today, think of their smartphones if they are misplaced for even a second. If they can't text or use their apps it seems the end of a love affair.

Keep writing

Joan

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Thanks very much for the kind review, Joan. Much appreciated! Craig

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Mar-2018

You are so kindly welcome, Craig.

Joan