Love's Melody
Valentine 5/7/519 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Is this like drying flowers? I think my mom and sister use to dry them and then I think they hung them up. They probably have flowers that evoke memories from years ago. I was never a flower person but I'm sure many people have had this happen.
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Is this like drying flowers? I think my mom and sister use to dry them and then I think they hung them up. They probably have flowers that evoke memories from years ago. I was never a flower person but I'm sure many people have had this happen.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from patcelaw
As a child I often would open a book and in the pages I would find a flower petal. I suppose it was my mother who placed the petals there, but I never understood why. Blessing in the contest. Patricia
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As a child I often would open a book and in the pages I would find a flower petal. I suppose it was my mother who placed the petals there, but I never understood why. Blessing in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely entry for the '5-7-5 Valentine' writing prompt.
Well done and well said in your few, well chosen words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a lovely entry for the '5-7-5 Valentine' writing prompt.
Well done and well said in your few, well chosen words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from Debbie Pope
You create a beautiful image with your words and photo. I love these short poems wherein the composer must waste not a syllable. You did it well. Good luck in the upcoming competition.
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You create a beautiful image with your words and photo. I love these short poems wherein the composer must waste not a syllable. You did it well. Good luck in the upcoming competition.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Excellent, I really liked this, and a great final line. I love that phrasing.
Nothing to fault, a lovely 5/7/5.
Best of luck in the contest, take care.
-James
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Excellent, I really liked this, and a great final line. I love that phrasing.
Nothing to fault, a lovely 5/7/5.
Best of luck in the contest, take care.
-James
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet Valentine 5-7-5 poem Zanya, faded rose petals and old melodies, I wish you luck with the conest, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
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This is a sweet Valentine 5-7-5 poem Zanya, faded rose petals and old melodies, I wish you luck with the conest, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi Zanya, a lovely wee poem for the Valentine contest. i really did like your chose words. Good luck in the contest. Not easy to say so much in so few words. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Hi Zanya, a lovely wee poem for the Valentine contest. i really did like your chose words. Good luck in the contest. Not easy to say so much in so few words. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a tasteful presentation, Zanya. It's always nice to have those memories preserved with love and care that pressing rose petals entails.
This is good to form except your second line has 8 syllables. So you can edit to change, and you have a lovely entry.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Such a tasteful presentation, Zanya. It's always nice to have those memories preserved with love and care that pressing rose petals entails.
This is good to form except your second line has 8 syllables. So you can edit to change, and you have a lovely entry.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
Comment from artisart4u
Your Valentine poem is very nice. The last line sums it up.
The second line you have eight syllables.
"In" is considered as one just in case you didn't know. Other than that, it is beautiful.
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Your Valentine poem is very nice. The last line sums it up.
The second line you have eight syllables.
"In" is considered as one just in case you didn't know. Other than that, it is beautiful.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
