Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A great tribute to your friend, Kerry Hall. I was not quite sure of the meaning of the friends "named tree." Usually, a tree would be an impediment on the course but I'm guessing he finds even trees have become friends just as he nurtured friendship on the course.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you, and yes trees are normally an impediment, but in Kerry Halls case every time his ball would head in the direction of a tree somehow his ball would land back out on the fairway, unlike most other players, many thanks****kahpot

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Love the start and finish making it a complete thought. Very well written and a sport I love to watch, one of the few. The rhyme and flow are easy and spot on

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Excellent poem and a great memorial poem to your friend. Thanks for sharing your game and cute approach to sports poetry. May your friend Rest In Peace. Regards.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks memory (about friend who taught how to play golf) is unforgettable; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Share A Story In A Poem writing prompt.
A good and interesting story told in your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about your friend, now gone, that taught you have to play golf. You used such great descriptive and heart felt words. The art work you chose went well with this piece too! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

reply by Teri7 on 26-Jan-2018

you are so welcome my friend!

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

I really enjoyed this poem. It read very smoothly as I was reading it out loud. Thanks for sharing your craft with us. You chose a great picture to go with this poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

A wonderful story and a wonderful tribute. I love the sinks long of the rhythm, the meter and Ryan where spectacular. I love like a LOVE a man and his interaction with his friends and earth mother.
Very well written eyes your this Leslie I see no room for improvement the station was great and seeing the follow up. Very good ending.

Blessings,
Brother Badger

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a beautiful tribute to your friend who taught you to play golf and learned well, fond memories here in your warm and sentimental poem, best wishes, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot