Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "The Throne"Dawn of Chaos
32 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I found this to be an interesting read
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I found this to be an interesting read
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I'm trying revisions to enhance my reader comprehension of what's being stated, thanking you for your kind words and generous rate.
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Your very welcome have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from Eternal Muse
This had great imagery and visuals. I enjoyed your artistic presentation and artwork. Good use of enjambment. Loved your creativity. This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This had great imagery and visuals. I enjoyed your artistic presentation and artwork. Good use of enjambment. Loved your creativity. This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This piece has its challenges, fighting its pit attempting to enhance the clarity of write, thanking you for your generous rate and warming viewpoint.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Excellent work! I like your piece of poetry. No grammatical errors. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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I like how you structured this poem. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Excellent work! I like your piece of poetry. No grammatical errors. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Glad aspects in this particular read were found appealing to your interests, fighting with the pits within my works. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thoughts about its structured presentation.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem is quite the brimstone and hellfire warning to us to change our ways before it's too late.Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Your poem is quite the brimstone and hellfire warning to us to change our ways before it's too late.Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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I tried at least to convey this intent in this work, pleased at least you captured that intent despite probable flaws contained in its conveyance. Thanking you for your generous rate and appreciated thought about its read.
Comment from Dan Dinkel
Many complex concepts in this work! Well written, although it took me a while to get through it. I like poems that force me to work my mind to understand, but this one was a bit too taxing for my taste. Will have to say, a masterful use of words to convey your concept.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Many complex concepts in this work! Well written, although it took me a while to get through it. I like poems that force me to work my mind to understand, but this one was a bit too taxing for my taste. Will have to say, a masterful use of words to convey your concept.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Trying to better my conveyed thoughts, appreciating viewpoints as your own that assist my revisions within my writes. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments prevailing its read.
Comment from Donna swanson
Thank you Poet Thank you!
You write in a way that invites, excites, ignites imagination.
Feels heart,
Zeal's spirit,
Reels mind.
I said oh my!
This is a piece of heaven.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you Poet Thank you!
You write in a way that invites, excites, ignites imagination.
Feels heart,
Zeal's spirit,
Reels mind.
I said oh my!
This is a piece of heaven.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I wish others felt like you still learning and hopefully bettering my conveyance skills. Thanking you for your explosive response with generous rate glad aspects in this particular write were appealing to your interests.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I can see that the writing has been well thought out. The choice of words has been decisive. I can appreciate that. I have a difficult time with some of the disjointed phrases that you use. However, I like the way that it sounds so I review a poem on how it feels to my ear. -January L.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I can see that the writing has been well thought out. The choice of words has been decisive. I can appreciate that. I have a difficult time with some of the disjointed phrases that you use. However, I like the way that it sounds so I review a poem on how it feels to my ear. -January L.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I do suffer pits in my writes hoping to smooth such features thanking you for the heads up and generous rate despite flaws always welcomed your review.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This needs some sort of punctuation to make it flow. It's hard to read it and to make sense of the individual thoughts without something to break them up. It would be a lot better than.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This needs some sort of punctuation to make it flow. It's hard to read it and to make sense of the individual thoughts without something to break them up. It would be a lot better than.
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Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I appreciate your response and acknowledge pits in my writes thanking you for your generous rate and patience as I hopefully improve those read.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
At first, I thought, what is this? I just didn't get it, but the more I tried to understand it, I found myself being drawn into the poems intricacies. I found myself reading it first, as written, then I saw a clear division down the center of the page, and I read each side as two separate poems. Then I tried reading the two lines on the left side of the page before reading the single line on the other side next to it. Finally, I started on the right side with the single line and read backwards to the double lines on the left. This Poem blew my mind! I Still don't think I fully understand it, but I had fun misunderstanding it, in so many different ways.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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At first, I thought, what is this? I just didn't get it, but the more I tried to understand it, I found myself being drawn into the poems intricacies. I found myself reading it first, as written, then I saw a clear division down the center of the page, and I read each side as two separate poems. Then I tried reading the two lines on the left side of the page before reading the single line on the other side next to it. Finally, I started on the right side with the single line and read backwards to the double lines on the left. This Poem blew my mind! I Still don't think I fully understand it, but I had fun misunderstanding it, in so many different ways.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Wow! I do have my writing issues, considering given responses of comments, applying revisions I understand through given statement. Thanking you for your response and generous rate.
Comment from David M. Miller
Could you help me understand the theology behind this a little more? The structure seems to be pretty good and well put together, but it is thick. It is hard for me to follow, but not in that it lacks quality, but the poetic format is further away from general narrative and therefore is harder to understand. I think this was on purpose though.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Could you help me understand the theology behind this a little more? The structure seems to be pretty good and well put together, but it is thick. It is hard for me to follow, but not in that it lacks quality, but the poetic format is further away from general narrative and therefore is harder to understand. I think this was on purpose though.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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No its my lack of proper grammar apparently needed your perception prevailing my writes. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts