Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written six-word poem. Young children have a natural love and we as adults can learn much from them about unconditional love.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Hi Sandra, Yes children tell it as they see it and we could learn a lot we seem to forget the beauty as we get older. Many Cheers

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I like to review these shorty poems. I can dissect them in seconds. This one is grammatical, with a clear message, at to prompt, so I can say,
in my opinion, excellent.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Hi LIJRed, I am glad you like these short poems and pleased you thought this one excellent made my day
Cheers to you

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

How lovely! Six very well chosen words indeed

Obviously the rhyme has cadent appeal. Wondering if punctuation like a comma
or colon would enhance it? In any event, good as it is.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Hi Hayley, Many thanks for your review and comments and suggestions. I am pleased you thought it good I had considered punctuation but decided to just go without, Thanks for stopping by Cheers

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Thanks for this six WORD poetry contest entry.
Now on to the review...
Adjective Content was wonderful as well as Objective Content and based on theme and imagery...
And, on a scale of one to one hundred...
100!
RICKY1024

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Hi Ricky, Wow what a lovely comment and you have made me happy with your review. I am pleased you took the time to read it Many Cheers

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Very cute picture to base your poem on! Nice 6 word poem about love. It only it were as innocent as these two. Before distrust and jealousy show their ugly faces. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Hi RoostyNester.Thank for your review and comments and yes It is a cute picture I hope I did it justice and enjoy your support Many Cheers

Comment from rockinm76233

Excellent

Beautiful words, beautiful message. Good luck with contest and keep writing.
I enjoyed the message very much. The image of our first love comes to mind.


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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016

Hi rockinm76233 Thank you so much for your encouraging lovely words for my little poem I have been waiting for a poem to reflect this image and glad you liked it and that it brought back some memories Cheers

Comment from Aqua2021

Excellent

I liked this simply and short poem. You're right, 6 words can have more meaning than you think! The image goes perfectly with this poem! Thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I have been away for a few weeks and this is my first one back I do so much appreciate your words Many Cheers