Comment from RosieCus

Excellent

An excellent contest entry. It turned my frown upside down, I think you're in with a strong chance here. Best wishes with this contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thanks! Happy this poem could make you smile. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

reply by RosieCus on 13-Jun-2016

You're welcome

Comment from create4christ

Excellent

Well, this is a JUST FOR FUN 5-7-5 poem...Good luck with your contest entry. Your picture does work with your poem...and your words describe your picture perfectly.

GOOD JOB. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

This piece makes me chuckle. Well thought of the subject. Your illustration shows the boyfriend's face is aghast while the innocent girlfriend sweetly smiles on and appropriately matches the thought. Your poem format achieves the syllable counts, the topic is very comical, so your poetic form achieves clarity on loving takes time and understanding from both parties. Best.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thanks for the wonderful review. Happy this piece made you chuckle. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

reply by cumulus365 on 13-Jun-2016

You are welcome. Best.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

= LOL The perfect picture to showcase your 5.7.5, and aptly named.
= All spot on for a super entry for the prompt.
= Good luck in the contest.

(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax


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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thanks! Glad you got a laugh from this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from P1

Excellent

another lovely short read
the picture speaks volumes
wouldn't ya imagine what he is
thinking the way he's looking at her
chance for romance.. who knows


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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)