Brelynn
Miracles still Happen (please read authors note before reading poem)57 total reviews
Comment from create4christ
That picture is just precious and fits your poem perfectly. I love your rhyme and rhythm scheme. It's flow is just right. It flows nicely and was a joy to read. I know you have to be excited. We have 6 grandchildren now, but I still remember the first. Good luck with your YOU'RE HAVING A GRANDCHILD contest entry...and CONGRATS on your grandchild who you will hold in your arms very soon.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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That picture is just precious and fits your poem perfectly. I love your rhyme and rhythm scheme. It's flow is just right. It flows nicely and was a joy to read. I know you have to be excited. We have 6 grandchildren now, but I still remember the first. Good luck with your YOU'RE HAVING A GRANDCHILD contest entry...and CONGRATS on your grandchild who you will hold in your arms very soon.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
You are not the first ones to wonder all the things you are wondering, nor are you alone in asking yourself, should I lay down the quill. That out of the way, this is a cute and moving poem, full of suspense and normal apprehension. I think we've all been where you are! You wrote it very well, if you ask me. I think--and I'm not always right--if a person wants to write, then write Time will tell if you have the gift or not. What do others say?
GoodHearted Woman
Marcia
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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You are not the first ones to wonder all the things you are wondering, nor are you alone in asking yourself, should I lay down the quill. That out of the way, this is a cute and moving poem, full of suspense and normal apprehension. I think we've all been where you are! You wrote it very well, if you ask me. I think--and I'm not always right--if a person wants to write, then write Time will tell if you have the gift or not. What do others say?
GoodHearted Woman
Marcia
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Frankly, I have mixed reviews on my writing! I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
A beautiful sentiment for a baby who has been longed for and will be well loved. You should have this printed up and framed for her nursery.
Blessings on a healthy and safe delivery. Happy grandparenting!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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A beautiful sentiment for a baby who has been longed for and will be well loved. You should have this printed up and framed for her nursery.
Blessings on a healthy and safe delivery. Happy grandparenting!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Mary, that is exactly what my daughter-in-law said. That is exactly what I'm going to do! I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from tfawcus
You capture the sense of excitement and anticipation rather well here. I was marginally distracted by the bold print of some words, but can understand why you might have thought it necessay. Have a blessed Sunday.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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You capture the sense of excitement and anticipation rather well here. I was marginally distracted by the bold print of some words, but can understand why you might have thought it necessay. Have a blessed Sunday.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What a lovely way to announce an impending arrival and so much NOW by having a gender reveal party before the birth. As you said it flowed nicely when reading as you wanted, through the bold letters. A great idea. Hope all goes well,
cheers
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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What a lovely way to announce an impending arrival and so much NOW by having a gender reveal party before the birth. As you said it flowed nicely when reading as you wanted, through the bold letters. A great idea. Hope all goes well,
cheers
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from l.raven
HI Dr.Nad, CONGRATULATIONS...on the birth of Brelynn, children are such a wonderful gift of God to us...I pray for a safe delivery and a healthy child...poem very well written...and a precious picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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HI Dr.Nad, CONGRATULATIONS...on the birth of Brelynn, children are such a wonderful gift of God to us...I pray for a safe delivery and a healthy child...poem very well written...and a precious picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
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you are sooooo very welcome...and may God Bless you and your family as well...Linda xxoo
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Thanks again
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
When they knew there babe was en route. (their not there)
Congrats what an exciting time for you. I will never have grandchildren so love sharing the excitement with those who do. I hope you post about her when she arrives. I'll be looking for it. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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When they knew there babe was en route. (their not there)
Congrats what an exciting time for you. I will never have grandchildren so love sharing the excitement with those who do. I hope you post about her when she arrives. I'll be looking for it. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from Pantygynt
The poem well reflects the happy panic and chaos for tge expected arrival. However soohisticated we get this is still one of nature's miracles. My mum was told for years that she couldn't conceive but I am here to prove them wrong.
I think i would call yhis syllabic freestyle but what's in a name.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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The poem well reflects the happy panic and chaos for tge expected arrival. However soohisticated we get this is still one of nature's miracles. My mum was told for years that she couldn't conceive but I am here to prove them wrong.
I think i would call yhis syllabic freestyle but what's in a name.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from Janet Foor
Miracles do happen and the birth of a baby Brelynn is certainly one.
I liked your notes too. We have 11 grandchildren. Three used to live next door and then their parents divorced and that ended that. We still see them regularly. The other 8 live 3,000 miles away and some of them I've never seen. Heartache for me.
Congratulation on becoming a grand parent. I read once that "If I'd known being a grandparent would be so much fun, I'd have had them first". Lol
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Miracles do happen and the birth of a baby Brelynn is certainly one.
I liked your notes too. We have 11 grandchildren. Three used to live next door and then their parents divorced and that ended that. We still see them regularly. The other 8 live 3,000 miles away and some of them I've never seen. Heartache for me.
Congratulation on becoming a grand parent. I read once that "If I'd known being a grandparent would be so much fun, I'd have had them first". Lol
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.
Comment from P1
congratulations to you all how wonderful
to have such an event to look forward to
your poem is a great tribute to the anticcipation
you feel, and i'm sure in years to come your
granddaughter will love it.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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congratulations to you all how wonderful
to have such an event to look forward to
your poem is a great tribute to the anticcipation
you feel, and i'm sure in years to come your
granddaughter will love it.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication . Dr. Nad.