Comment from Raoul D'Harmental

Excellent

Hi zanya

This is an excellent entry into this contest and I wish you all the best in it. Love the alliterations throughout the poem particularly. Thank you very much for sharing this. R

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

And thank you for reading and the critique Zanya

Comment from LoveLifeKnight

Excellent

lovely poem and great picture to go with it. i really like the title phrase. and the fact that you used the word emblazon and made the first line flow into the second. you really put a lot into this poem

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

A great review thanks for taking time to read and critique Zanya

Comment from Judvan2

Excellent

Very nice descriptive words. The picture is beautiful. Its a good entry for the contest. I hope you do well. Its fun to write these short descriptive poems as a challenge. Good luck!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and the critique Zanya

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

Zanya,

This is a beautiful 5-7-5 which actually follows haiku guidelines. You present beautiful images with your words, which as chosen, take us to the exact moment in time. Very effective verb choice with "emblazon." A lot of imagery here.

Well done.

Lena

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thank you indeed for reading and the detaile d critique Zanya

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

I have had the opportunity of witnessing sunsets here in Ohio, on the Oregon coast, Ireland and China. No matter where I am, sunsets that this most excellent contest entry describes are so beautiful and very calming. The sunsets in Ireland were the most incredible and intense. So many colors swirling together.

I wish you good luck in this contest. It helped bring back some great memories and I thank you for sharing this most excellent 5-7-5 piece of poetry.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

A great and meaningful review thank you for reading Zanya

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful and remarkable picture you paint in the lovely 5/7/5 poem. Excellent alliteration with saffron - sunset - shadows - Spring.
Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Delighted with this review thank you for taking time to read Zanya

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

You got my attention with the mention of, "saffron". I love that description of yellow, especially when attached to a sunset. You have the right amount of syllables as required for this contest. This is a nice micro scene with lovely descriptions like a work of art. Best wishes in this contest!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Wow I am encouraged with these positive comments isn't saffron the most beautiful color? Zanya

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

A very nice 5-7-5 here. I especially love the first line. Image is most suitable as well. Congratulations, and good luck in the contest. Craig.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thank you for reading and the critique Zanya

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

beautiful picture, great 5.7.5 on the prompt great meaning good thought. Good luck with this and have yourself a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

And thank you for reading and the critique Zanya

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Beautiful - I have been noticing the palette of colors, smells and sounds of Spring lately. Gorgeous! I love that your 5-7-5 brings this to light. I wish you good luck in the contest!
Carol

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Great review thanks for reading and the critique -encouraging ! Zanya