Comment from RoseAnderson

Exceptional

In this haiku you've made quite the statement. That's exactly the point. I see you've covered all the details for the prompt. It would say it all even without your image choice. Very well done.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Hi RoseAnderson. My sincerest thank you for your review and fabulous six star rating. I wanted to say something powerful and to me man is at the greatest risk for this prompts subject. I am so pleased you thought it a worthy 6. Many Cheers

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
Exact syllables at 5-7-5
Mankind slaughters their "own"
because they don't perceive others
as their own
Extinction hopefully not eminent
Excellent picture to match poem
Good luck in the contest




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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Hi rspoet, Thank you very much for your encouraging review for my haiku, . I am pleased you think it is a good entry Cheers

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Your Haiku: "man against man" is a drumbeat that bellows out a solume warning. Mankind is sick and in need of a Savior. If we are not careful we destroy one another. May God Bless You.

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Hi Dr Nad, with grateful thanks for reading and reviweing my haiku for this contest. One day we may have to face the truth of our own stupididity. Cheers

reply by Dr. Nad on 07-Feb-2016

You are Welcome, Embrace the Love from Above!

reply by Anonymous Member on 13-Feb-2016

You are Welcome, Embrace the Love from Above!