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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Hide away, be afraid to see what our lives was and what we running from all the time. We don't need mirrors to see what is going on inside our minds.

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    I LOVE the way you put that, very poetic and insightful.
    "We don't need mirrors to see what is going on inside our minds." That's a super line right there. I give your review a six. :)) mikey
reply by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Dec-2015
    Thank you for the "six" just sad it doesn't count. Lol
Comment from writeapoem
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Hideaway an interesting thought the poem describes well the intent. The Black Stallion a mysterious animal of beauty the perfect image displayed to fit the occasion.

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    Great. I'm glad you see the Black Stallion in the same way I do. Most encouraging. Thank you, mikey
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi Mikey,

I loved the lyrics on this one. It is very reminiscent of some seventies rock tracks I used to listen to. That is not a bad thing (especially the guitar in the recording). The lyrics have almost a surreal tinge to them, peeling back for more meaning.

Great work
G

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    Wow. Thanks so much. The quality of the recording is a bit much for some. I'm pleased you were able to listen anyway and enjoy. A super encouraging response! mikey