Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You have the fifteen words
and the poem is smokin"
Seems a bit more like your first word - lust
Excellent picture to match
One must be a contortionist
But poem is well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Hi Rspoet thank for your great review. Just a little something I came up with for this quest and a bit of fun too With Cheers for your comments and good luck

Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

I have changed my rating from four to five, because I never meant to rate it a four anyway! Original comments follow:

Geeze after 40 years, you still feel like that? Wow! That is amazing, and awe-inspiring. I enjoyed this sweet lil poem because it said it all ... and I wonder about the "master" bit ... getting images here, but won't share due to this being a family site n all (wink wink). I hope this wins the contest! Good luck xoxoxoxo

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Ha Ha well one has to take a bit of poetic licence when one is creating a poem like this LOL thanks for your review and good luck wishes, Cheers