Christine's Poems
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. You personified winter in a great way. Good use of rhyme. Your words flow smoothly and the image is perfect. You told a great story. Good job. I see no changes. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. You personified winter in a great way. Good use of rhyme. Your words flow smoothly and the image is perfect. You told a great story. Good job. I see no changes. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thank you jannypan for reading and reviewing my Winter poem I enjoyed writing this and happy to share my work and do so much appreciate any review I get and I thank you for your support and kind words for this one .With Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very well done, Christine. I especially enjoyed the snappy cadence and rhythmic beat you've incorporated in composing this. The rhyming is excellent, and the idea of Old Man Winter coming on as a lover is unique and freshly done.
What an excellent entry this truly is. I was very fortunate to do as well as I did, it appears...
~Dean ;}
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Very well done, Christine. I especially enjoyed the snappy cadence and rhythmic beat you've incorporated in composing this. The rhyming is excellent, and the idea of Old Man Winter coming on as a lover is unique and freshly done.
What an excellent entry this truly is. I was very fortunate to do as well as I did, it appears...
~Dean ;}
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi Dean, Thanks for your great review and encouraging comments for this poem for the contest .It was fun to write and just sort of happened once I wrote the first line LOL . I am a bit addicted to a good rhyme and like my poetry to read with and easy flow so I am stoked you thought it a worthy entry . Wishing you and yours a very Merry Xmas and all the best for the holiday season . As always a big Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Ice cold winter, if you only know how much I miss your cold fingers in the soaring heat. I can not wait for your return. To sleep inside a warm bed instead on top of the sheets and a blowing fan to keep cool. Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Ice cold winter, if you only know how much I miss your cold fingers in the soaring heat. I can not wait for your return. To sleep inside a warm bed instead on top of the sheets and a blowing fan to keep cool. Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thanks Sandra for reading and reviewing my contest entry for Winter I love the Summer but sometimes it does get too Hot and at times a cold night is welcome Cheers so much
Comment from ~Dovey
I thought you did extremely well with the personification of winter. Although I haven't read the other entries, I suspect that this piece will do very well. Over the years I've read many personification pieces, this one rates as one of the best! Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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I thought you did extremely well with the personification of winter. Although I haven't read the other entries, I suspect that this piece will do very well. Over the years I've read many personification pieces, this one rates as one of the best! Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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wow Thank you Kim I feel very humbled by yoor lovely words and really appreciate your feedback. i enjoyed writing this one and it seemed to just come out , with kind regards and Cheers
Comment from Liberty Justice
Such a fantastic gripping poem. Winter personified as a romantic lover sending chills down lover's back. Icy animated tree branches reaching out as though taking hold. Such sexually explicit verses rhyming a beautiful tune.liberty justice
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Such a fantastic gripping poem. Winter personified as a romantic lover sending chills down lover's back. Icy animated tree branches reaching out as though taking hold. Such sexually explicit verses rhyming a beautiful tune.liberty justice
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Wow Liberty Justice. Thank you so much for your fabulous review and 6 stars for my poem I am thrilled .You have gained everything I intended with this post so I am pleased you liked it to this degree a very warm Cheers to you
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. I have just read another poem about the wintry woes and it is true that people feel very different ways about this time of year.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. I have just read another poem about the wintry woes and it is true that people feel very different ways about this time of year.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Hi Tomes Thanks for stopping by to have a read and give me a review for this Winter contest entry I thought I would write something a bit different with this theme and this is what transpired , Cheers for your interest in my work
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My pleasure.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend. That was a pretty amazing piece. I got caught up into it. I wish you the best. Thanks for using my artwork, Merry Christmas, Loyd
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Hello poet friend. That was a pretty amazing piece. I got caught up into it. I wish you the best. Thanks for using my artwork, Merry Christmas, Loyd
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Well hello Loyd I think we must be on the same wave length I have just read and reviewed your Christmas poem so somehow we meet in cyber space LOL ( a bit spooky really ) anyway A big Thank you for your comments and thanks for having such great artwork to choose from , Merry Xmas again Cheers
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Hello to you. It sure is because normally I never get on here on Sunday morning, just too much to do. Maybe it is God speaking, He works in mysterious ways. If you would like to pursue this conversation about God and faith, let me know. My prayers are with you today. Loyd
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well we will never really know will we LOL but have a great day
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Hello to you. It sure is because normally I never get on here on Sunday morning, just too much to do. Maybe it is God speaking, He works in mysterious ways. If you would like to pursue this conversation about God and faith, let me know. My prayers are with you today. Loyd
Comment from William Ross
Very good you captured personalizing the winter just great here. Written very well flows so easily along. best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Very good you captured personalizing the winter just great here. Written very well flows so easily along. best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Thank you William for your time to read and review my Nature poem I am pleased you found it worthy and appreciate your best of luck wishes Cheers
Comment from chasennov
A Winter's tale "'Winter Ecstasy'" Well you certainly found some inspiration from somewhere. This poem you have created here is very good, well formulated and so is the structure. Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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A Winter's tale "'Winter Ecstasy'" Well you certainly found some inspiration from somewhere. This poem you have created here is very good, well formulated and so is the structure. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Thanks so much for your lovely review and the inspiration for this poem remains a secret LOL. But I am glad you found it well done chasennov I am glad you stopped by to have a read thanks for your support with Cheers
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You are most welcome.
Comment from trumby
After reading the poem, I suddenly missed my wife. Well written piece here. Well done on the rhyme from the start to the end. The message is clear. The choice of words very appropriate. I love the following lines:
"To see you melt beneath my touch
For me will almost be too much."
I love to see how I affect my wife. And for sure she will be thinking of me if she will read this poem. Good entry in the contest. Good luck and all the best for you.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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After reading the poem, I suddenly missed my wife. Well written piece here. Well done on the rhyme from the start to the end. The message is clear. The choice of words very appropriate. I love the following lines:
"To see you melt beneath my touch
For me will almost be too much."
I love to see how I affect my wife. And for sure she will be thinking of me if she will read this poem. Good entry in the contest. Good luck and all the best for you.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Thanks Trumby for reading my poem and for your great review .I did something a bit different with the theme but I am glad you found it wife wanting . I hope she does read this . Cheers for you good luck wishes