The Drunk
People are not always what they appear to be15 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This was an interesting story, although it was really a long piece to read. I prefer a little shorter stories myself, but to each his own, I guess. I do look forward to reading more of your work though.
Kat
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Hi Brett,
This was an interesting story, although it was really a long piece to read. I prefer a little shorter stories myself, but to each his own, I guess. I do look forward to reading more of your work though.
Kat
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Strongly believe a story requires whatever number of words it takes to tell it completely.
Otherwise, why bother writing it at all?
Glad you enjoyed this little tale.
Your comments and support appreciated.
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I guess it's true, but when mine get quite long, I make them into different chapters. LOL
Comment from doggymad
I loved this Brett. That babe can sure spin a yarn. Nice one liners throughout that put a smile on my face.
TJ has a great role model in his mother if he wants a life of crime.
Lovely to see that all was not as it seemed with Jed, although his demise was the one thing I didn't see coming
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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I loved this Brett. That babe can sure spin a yarn. Nice one liners throughout that put a smile on my face.
TJ has a great role model in his mother if he wants a life of crime.
Lovely to see that all was not as it seemed with Jed, although his demise was the one thing I didn't see coming
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Wasn't sure whether Jed and "mommy" should have hooked up, or Jed should be killed off. His fate was chosen. Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments, support, and the six stars appreciated.
Comment from Nosha17
That lady certainly knew how to handle a gun. I liked the descriptions of the drunk, he did a good job getting the little guy back. Well narrated, good dialogue and an enjoyable read. faye
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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That lady certainly knew how to handle a gun. I liked the descriptions of the drunk, he did a good job getting the little guy back. Well narrated, good dialogue and an enjoyable read. faye
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Ulla
Well, an interesting write seen from a baby's point view, which I suppose is a bit of a novelty. Shame that the drunk who turned out not to be so drunk should pay with his life. Sour grapes. All best. Ulla
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Well, an interesting write seen from a baby's point view, which I suppose is a bit of a novelty. Shame that the drunk who turned out not to be so drunk should pay with his life. Sour grapes. All best. Ulla
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Sunday is not over and I have one six left. What are you writers doing to me?
This is absourtley wonderfully written.
Exciting and interesting as told from the point of view never seen.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Sunday is not over and I have one six left. What are you writers doing to me?
This is absourtley wonderfully written.
Exciting and interesting as told from the point of view never seen.
Nicely done
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments, support, and the six stars appreciated very much indeed. Having the baby tell the story was just a little different twist.