Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Nice 5/7/5 poem on the topic of lost. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is attractive. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Gypsy

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thanks Gypsy for your review and comments re my 5-7-5 I hope it appeals to the reader thanks for the good luck wishes also Cheers

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image for your poem and a good presentation.
-Good format.
-Excellent message for troubled times around the world.
-Good connection between lines one and two.
-The imagery in line two is excellent with "sea of despair."
-Very good message in the last line.
-Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thanks Respa1 for reading and reviewing this entry for the 5-7-5 I think we all feel a little disheartened at the world affairs at the moment and so My feeling came out in this Appreciate you review Cheers

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Nov-2015

You are very welcome. Your feeling definitely showed, and it is much appreciated and needed in uncertain times.

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank You 😃

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Nov-2015

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine poem for the contest
Excellent message
using the Beatles song title
good alliteration in lost/love
Perfect picture to match
both the poem and message
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thanks rspoet for your lovely review and sentiments re my poem for this prompt. I appreciate ypur time and comments. Maybe one day the world with peaceful here's hoping Cheers

Comment from alvina224224

Excellent

Congratulations, author. All the world needs now, is love, commonsense, and positive thinking to redirect the frightening picture of today. Horrific tragedies as we have seen lately, threaten to destroy all of these attributes, and I feel so sad for future generations. What a legacy they will have.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you alvina for your positive review and comments. Yes we have do do something soon and I think a world unity is certainly needed form all points . So my 5-7-5 is my contribution Cheers

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Hate keep(s) everyone

This is a very nice poem and I appreciate the topic. It's so appropriate right now. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your thoughts!

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thanks Robyn for your great review and for reading my poem ( thanks also for the s ooops) I just needed to say something and these words were easy to find. Cheers